Published October 12, 2006
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I'm new to this, but I liked this, and I think it flows well
Hey Lexy. I opened this in antipation that it was about the member of the month MYTH. We all love Myth, yaay.
But then I read what you wrote and I thought we already went over this.
Less repetition is better and more powerful.
Its Always and Forever
and a life time experience
Its now or its never
and hard to convince.
Its a one way road
and the gate to heaven or hell
Its where your hearts bestowed
a magical spell...
Love is a myth.....
anyway, i will let the others comment more, these are my thoughts. I am not sure you explained why it is a myth. Your descriptions indicate that is actually NOT a myth, but tangible. Which reminds me of one more thing, I think the question at the end is a bit redundant.