Published May 29, 2008
An Oasis in the desert.
Little by Little
I start a revolution from my bed.
The champagne supernova
Living forever in its Morning Glory.
Lord don’t slow me down
I’m on the Cigarettes and Alcohol.
The songbird acquiesces
Half a world away.
Stop crying your heart out
D’you know what I mean?
The wonderwall is cracking;
Stand by me –
I cast no shadow.
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To be quite honest, I had no idea what the poem was talking about. I mean, I write pretty vaguely as well, but this just completely obscures any ideas the poem might've had. Don't be as vague next time, and you should be fine, i'm sure.