Published March 6, 2010
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Hey! Did you publish this on another site? I read this somewhere else. Still it is very good. A bit long but I honestly don't think it can be shortened. Great job on your description and dialogue. Plus this is a great fantasy novel with goblins, ghouls and the works. Are you going to add more characters. Or is this centered around Bard?