A Tiny Little Girl,
Walking through a path full of hurdles,
Where, surrounded with wolfs that they can eat her.
Heart full of pain but never exposed.
Want to cry but never told.
Walking through a big storm but stand still on her tiny feet.
Born beautiful but betrayed.
Pushing herself ahead towards the path.
Strong winds trying her to fade away,
But never let her hope to go away.
Helping with her tiny little hands.
Works hard but never get appreciated.
Listens to everyone but speaks to no one.
Mindfull of sorrow, eyes full of tears,
But never fake the smile on her face.
Standing alone against the world.
Responsibilities on her shoulders getting heavy,
But never puts down the weight.
Praying to GOD with full of faith.
Waiting for his call.
She drowned in sorrow.
And drenched in sadness.
Finding reasons to smile,
Situations to be happy.
Although, the slight guiltiness in her heart never let her to be happy.
Yet, her innocence and faith make her to wait.
Even though the Spines poke her,
She let her Blood to flow.
Experiencing all these doesn't make her old.
Even though she is Still :
A Tiny Little Girl.
~Letters by yona~
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Hi, Elena here to review!
What you wrote was a masterpiece! What this brought to me was that it signified the harsh reality of what some of us faced yet we never backed down and I think this is really strong. It symbolizes resilience, strength, faith and the motivation to keep going for whatever that is.
I especially like this line! She went through so much that it's difficult or felt wrong for her to be fully happy without expecting the opposite. It's a struggle that we find sometimes in which we tell ourselves that we don't deserve happiness because there is much to be done or much to complete and we cannot find the time to express our optimism until we get through this. We're afraid that things will fall apart and thus, why we don't express happiness sometimes and this correlates to the overthinkers at times. So much 'what ifs' and depriving ourselves from what we're actually feeling in the present.
I also like this line because to me, it symbolizes even after all that we went through, at the end of the day we're still the little girl or boy who was brought into this life. We were still that innocent and loved once; it doesn't mean it can ever stop when we grow and face the hurdles and survive this thing called life.
We are still that little human we once were.
I love and appreciate your poem a lot and I find it meaningful and inspiring. You have a great talent in transforming the reality in the form of imagery and a reminder of how resilient we are without giving much credit to.
Thank you so much..✨ I'm so glad you noticed it.. thank you so much for the review.. hope you grow abundantly..
You're welcome! <3
Wishing you all the best✨️