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I hope you like this. This post is a lot longer than the Prologue. I would like feed back as then I…Mon Feb 01, 2010 8:29 pm -
Okay, so people had told me that my prologue was too short and was missing a bit of information, so…Mon Feb 01, 2010 7:53 pm -
Ok, so I took your advice and worked with it and here is the result :) Thanks to everyone who comme…Mon Feb 01, 2010 7:42 pm -
Chapter Two “June, did you sleep here last night?” a taunting voice called. I poked my head out of …Mon Feb 01, 2010 11:07 am -
Most of the White Knights rushed into the forest to see what the cause of the ado was. There they e…Sun Jan 31, 2010 10:05 pm -
(I still don't have time, will finish soon) Kye sat down in front of the blazing pink fire. She had…Sun Jan 31, 2010 9:01 pm -
“Where are we going, may I ask?” I asked so quietly that I thought she might not have heard. But, s…Sun Jan 31, 2010 8:07 pm -
Early morning opened into the sky, the bands of orange light rising into the blue, like a sunset in…Sun Jan 31, 2010 8:06 pm -
“Lexy! Come here my beautiful. Are you working hard? You know how much your mother had to beg to ge…Sun Jan 31, 2010 8:05 pm -
Chapter 4 Tya flinched as she heard Noah’s whispered words through her mirror of souls. Who was she…Sun Jan 31, 2010 5:20 pm -
Idres looked up, hearing something. He got up and looked towards the forest, eyes searching sword h…Sun Jan 31, 2010 4:50 pm -
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Chapter Two Rhyas Here is the link to Chapter One-Part Three: http://www.writerfeed.com/topic57250.…Sun Jan 31, 2010 4:02 pm -
The fifteen year old golden haired girl Chloe did not know that many other people were looking at t…Sun Jan 31, 2010 2:04 pm -
For the next few months, Maria continued her training as a warrior. Just as Geoffrey said, things g…Sun Jan 31, 2010 11:01 am -
Only trying it out. Hope you like it or hate it, doen't really matter. :D *************************…Sun Jan 31, 2010 10:00 am -
Chapter 2: The Reality of things “Thank you guys for helping me out, the villagers are indebted to …Sun Jan 31, 2010 6:39 am -
Run with Blood Chapter 1: Wet My head was throbbing from listening to Mr. Drexel’s speech this morn…Sun Jan 31, 2010 2:32 am -
Maria walked slowly to a tree and slumped down to the ground, resting her back against the tree. Sh…Sat Jan 30, 2010 11:41 pm -
Idly I turned towards my mother, “Okay, Mom. Let’s talk.” My mother scrutinized me with a very sobe…Sat Jan 30, 2010 9:41 pm -
Um... It's been a while, I know. Sorry... I spent a while on other ideas and neglected this one. Bu…Sat Jan 30, 2010 8:13 pm -
(I cannot decide a name, so for the time being, it shall be called 'Mistia'. Please enjoy and criti…Sat Jan 30, 2010 6:00 pm -
The girl who sat alone at the back of the class in the far right corner, the farthest seat from the…Sat Jan 30, 2010 8:04 am -
Locked Keeper: [2] *edited*-deleted-Sat Jan 30, 2010 5:35 am -
When I woke, it was to sunlight in my eyes. I blinked rapidly for a few seconds, and then looked ar…Fri Jan 29, 2010 11:38 pm -
Ok, here it is, hope it's not as boring or an 'information dump' or maybe 'pointless'. I tried to g…Fri Jan 29, 2010 8:21 pm -
This is the last chapter I have written. It'll be slower now. :) ---------- It had been a few days.…Fri Jan 29, 2010 6:28 pm -
A story I have been meaning to play with for ages, I am excited to finally get it under way. Temptr…Fri Jan 29, 2010 10:12 am -
I believe in the power of the man’s heart. Although full of frailties and uncertainties, I still be…Fri Jan 29, 2010 7:25 am -
Chapter 3 : Edited! Chapter 3 “You’re . . . You’re leaving me? I’ll be left here, alone?” Noah repr…Fri Jan 29, 2010 12:33 am -
Ok, I've just finished editing this post, hope you appreciate the changes :D Chapter 2 Noah walked …Fri Jan 29, 2010 12:08 am -
Chapter three! :D Again; tear it to shreds. ---------- Death laughed. “Yes, it would be. Teresa, te…Thu Jan 28, 2010 9:49 pm -
I've written a few chapters so far, but once you see chapter four up it'll start coming slower. :) …Thu Jan 28, 2010 9:27 pm -
Chapter One “Mommy!” “No Miranda, look away!” “Mommy!” “Sweetie, it’s too late, they’ve got her.” “…Thu Jan 28, 2010 9:07 pm -
Okay here it is Chapter 1:) CHAPTER 1 Eight years later... "Cecilia!" Cecilia Thompson was jerked o…Thu Jan 28, 2010 4:20 pm -
CHAPTER TWO: Angel Wings It goes without saying that he was shocked. Of course, judging by the look…Thu Jan 28, 2010 5:11 am -
This is just a little inside look at my imagination. It's only the first page of 5 that I wrote las…Thu Jan 28, 2010 3:39 am -
Okay! So here we are, with the chapter that'll finally answer questions you've probably wanted to k…Wed Jan 27, 2010 7:37 pm -
Chapter one. I sit pretending to work on my laptop in a 24-hoer coffee shop. Taking a sip of my car…Wed Jan 27, 2010 6:16 pm -
Re-draft complete you can find the new version in Fantasy Fiction Hello all, Nit-picks are most wel…Wed Jan 27, 2010 4:35 pm -
Thanks to everyone who reviewed, this is currently being rewrittenWed Jan 27, 2010 2:47 pm -
Dinner was awkward and I was glad that that was over. My mother and brothers couldn’t stop pesterin…Wed Jan 27, 2010 1:39 am -
Mark of the stones Chapter 2: “Mom?” I muttered as someone patted my shoulder to wake me up. I had …Tue Jan 26, 2010 12:18 pm -
Critique away. * Chapter One It rains. This is not, strictly speaking, the truth. Yes, there are th…Tue Jan 26, 2010 8:25 am -
The sun, climbing upwards to the highest point of the sky, revealed that it was nearing noon of tha…Mon Jan 25, 2010 11:36 pm -
Sky I sat there in my dorm fiddling with my bronze lighter, down one side of it the casing was see …Mon Jan 25, 2010 11:08 pm -
Chapter Two "I just feel like there’s something different about me.” I said my voice trailing off. …Mon Jan 25, 2010 9:44 pm -
Prologue Love. It's a strange word, it can mean so many things to so many different people. The dic…Mon Jan 25, 2010 9:32 pm -
It was not until when Maria reached the castle, when reality reached her. "Oh my God," Maria though…Mon Jan 25, 2010 8:38 pm -
Here we go, posting chapter 3, almost finished chapter 4. Hope you enjoy! :D Chapter 3 I gawked at …Mon Jan 25, 2010 3:26 pm
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