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Okay, Hi! I was told that my chapters were too long so I made the fourth chapter in two parts, if t…Mon Dec 28, 2009 10:59 am -
Attempt at escape. Will return reviews for all/any chapter.Mon Dec 28, 2009 2:45 am -
~*Chapter 1*~ You know how it goes ‘I have good news and bad news’ well out here its ‘I get rewards…Sun Dec 27, 2009 11:42 pm -
Updated 12/27/09 ** Walk of Shame: A Cinderella Story Part I “Disappointment is a sort of bankruptc…Sun Dec 27, 2009 7:18 pm -
Rated for slight sexual referance or something like that.Sun Dec 27, 2009 4:43 pm -
Okay, the last and final chapter. Now NOTE: I NEED to edit a certain death scene, or all of them, j…Sun Dec 27, 2009 4:13 pm -
Critiques are welcome.Sun Dec 27, 2009 4:12 pm -
Locked Earth's Daughter: Chapter 1The first chapter of my fantasy novel.Sun Dec 27, 2009 1:37 pm -
This is my third edit of this Prologue. Understand that I've been in a hurry the past few days, and…Fri Dec 25, 2009 8:53 pm -
Hey ya'll! This is Sands of Time, I am trying a different style of writing for me, several differen…Thu Dec 24, 2009 8:47 pm -
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One of my books I'm working on, this one is called Circle of Seasons, Autumns Passing. I haven't re…Wed Dec 23, 2009 7:49 pm -
YaaaY! Chapter two! I know this part is a little boring and long, but it gives alot of huge hints a…Tue Dec 22, 2009 4:48 pm -
This is Chapter two, Part one of my novel - Bloodlust. Hope you like it. Throughout and brutal crit…Tue Dec 22, 2009 2:54 pm -
AN: Yes, this is my baby. I'm slightly scared about putting it up, but I need to hear what YWS has …Mon Dec 21, 2009 11:20 pm -
As always, Silas made his rounds through the house that night. It was now just a little after ten t…Mon Dec 21, 2009 3:51 pm -
Chapter VIII - Planned The last days past in preparations and planning. It was decided that At the …Mon Dec 21, 2009 5:40 am -
Jo sat on the deck, her feet propped up against a barrel. They had docked the Goddess just off the …Sun Dec 20, 2009 8:29 pm -
Short and Sweet, I haven't posted in a LONG time, this was my NaNoWriMo story, btw, and it totals a…Sun Dec 20, 2009 2:42 pm -
Chapter VII - Greeted Cela squinted as her eyes adjusted to the dark lighting in the cabin. She wip…Sun Dec 20, 2009 2:17 pm -
I've been reading and reading and also reviewing. Now I am showing what I'm made of. ____ (The prol…Sat Dec 19, 2009 10:04 pm -
A/N: Hi everyone. Here's the next chapter of my story. It's taken a while for me to get around to i…Sat Dec 19, 2009 9:24 pm -
Here it is folks, newly edited. Hope you enjoy! Josette impatiently paced the length of her Father’…Sat Dec 19, 2009 8:18 pm -
You can read the prologue. I don't think you have to, but it might help you understand a little. Ch…Sat Dec 19, 2009 4:45 pm -
I hope none of you read the first edition to this story. It brings me to shame :( This is supposed …Sat Dec 19, 2009 4:32 pm -
King of Babylon By Dark Sploosh Chapter 7: Fallen Jinn burst through the door, sending it flying of…Sat Dec 19, 2009 4:11 am -
King of Babylon by Dark Sploosh Chapter 6: Three Devils “Go,” Jinn uttered. He turned me around wit…Fri Dec 18, 2009 9:09 am -
Chapter VI - Attacked Cela shivered in the cold night air. It was their fifth night sleeping under …Thu Dec 17, 2009 10:07 pm -
Chapter 1: Trickwitch How someone could go missing before they even arrived, Ryle thought as he att…Thu Dec 17, 2009 6:27 pm -
Hey guys ^^ Shina here ;)Thu Dec 17, 2009 1:25 am -
PROLOGUE: The rumbling of thunder and gentle pitter-patter of raindrops, have never felt so relaxin…Wed Dec 16, 2009 7:50 pm -
Ok I know I already got a topic up about it but I felt it needed a brand new one as I've named the …Wed Dec 16, 2009 6:21 am -
This is a short story I'm working on!! Enjoy :D ________________________ Click…Click…Click... Tempu…Tue Dec 15, 2009 1:11 pm -
Prologue Ever felt the feeling of pure perfection? Standing on this beach, I could feel it. Happine…Tue Dec 15, 2009 1:51 am -
As of right now, I have no prologue to this, because whatever I wrote just didn't fit. So, here's t…Tue Dec 15, 2009 1:05 am -
Part Two~! YAY! i'll be posting the next part soon, but i havent written that one up yet so it may …Mon Dec 14, 2009 10:33 pm -
*This story is a very rough draft...and it was influence by divine comedy...please comments are nee…Mon Dec 14, 2009 7:01 pm -
Chapter V - Allied Yet again Cela's mouth fell agape. Bryn had more secrets about her than Cela had…Mon Dec 14, 2009 3:15 pm -
Inside the conference room was millions of people. Yet it wasn’t the people he was amazed at. It wa…Mon Dec 14, 2009 2:13 am -
Alrighty! Part one, up and running~ please give your reveiws on my work desu! This is a random idea…Sun Dec 13, 2009 9:03 pm -
It hurt, but I still had to move. And move fast. Scrambling through the trees as fast as I could, s…Sun Dec 13, 2009 9:53 am -
Ok, so this is the first time that I have posted on here in a while. I hope that this turns into a …Sun Dec 13, 2009 5:25 am -
Chapter IV - Escaped Terrin crashed through the door. Bryn coward in his shadow. "What the hell hav…Sat Dec 12, 2009 7:20 pm -
Ok I actually planned to have this finished in a week and well I also planned for the chapter to be…Fri Dec 11, 2009 11:54 pm
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People, sorry that it's boring, I'll rewrite it. Wait.Fri Dec 11, 2009 10:29 pm -
Yay, my first post! I hope you guys enjoy this first chapter. ^_^ Kolson rubbed his hands together …Fri Dec 11, 2009 5:45 pm -
“Everyone, this is Nathaniel Forcas,” Ms. Horrance stated. “He is new to this class and school. The…Fri Dec 11, 2009 8:45 am -
Chapter III - Saved Terrin thrust Cela into her new room. It was up in a tower, a medium sized circ…Thu Dec 10, 2009 1:14 pm -
First of all, make sure you read the first chapter/preface, or this won't make sense. Second, the w…Thu Dec 10, 2009 12:36 pm -
So this is the first chapter. Go for it, and crit as hard as you like. Chapter I - Captured Cela sa…Thu Dec 10, 2009 12:05 pm
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