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The first stanza is good and solid poetry, though it's not quite up to the standards I'm used to ge…Wed Sep 26, 2007 3:19 am -
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Twirling we fall into ribbons of midnight gold my head spins but i twist and weave--- anonymity lie…Tue Sep 25, 2007 2:34 am -
I know this one sucks a lottttttttt.Mon Sep 24, 2007 6:09 pm -
Do you see the things you do to me? Do you see that things are happening? Do you see the one thing …Mon Sep 24, 2007 5:51 pm -
School assignment... I just wondered what you would think...Mon Sep 24, 2007 5:11 pm -
A Faded Memory Are you standing beside me? Or A million miles away? So here is your body But where …Mon Sep 24, 2007 4:51 pm -
Revised!Mon Sep 24, 2007 4:38 pm -
I'm alone in this world. No one cares about me. The world hates me... Like we haven't heard that be…Mon Sep 24, 2007 8:10 am -
This was written for a school assignment. We were supposed to write a personal narrative piece of p…Sun Sep 23, 2007 11:24 pm -
of the burning of well-used bridgesSun Sep 23, 2007 7:16 am -
Your words to me are so-- crass. They make me want to scream and laugh tossing aside my white dress…Sun Sep 23, 2007 5:26 am -
Two hearts Fragile, hurting, broken... Separated by space and time by oceans, mountains, thousands …Sun Sep 23, 2007 12:05 am -
Is nothing just a part of everything, as shadows are to empty light and how blackness is the presen…Thu Sep 20, 2007 11:54 pm -
Look inside, you know you'll find a heart Look in my heart you know you'll see your eyes Look at my…Thu Sep 20, 2007 11:03 pm -
harsh crit pleaseWed Sep 19, 2007 11:30 pm -
Was it Worth It? with every beat i wince from the pain tears cant describe the unimaginable sorrow …Wed Sep 19, 2007 10:51 pm -
There are ghosts in this house They don’t lurk in the dust beneath my bed Or between the musty clos…Wed Sep 19, 2007 10:05 pm -
Portrait of a Red-haired Woman Form based on "Portrait of a Lady" by William Carlos Williams Your h…Wed Sep 19, 2007 7:34 pm -
I. When in subtle mass I weighed, Latent boughs kicked fleshy drum. Falling circumstances staid The…Wed Sep 19, 2007 5:41 pm -
And with her artists' tool she scribed Her masterpiece of art The curlicues and pirouettes bleeding…Wed Sep 19, 2007 3:53 pm -
The feeling is mutualWed Sep 19, 2007 3:35 pm -
its my first poemTue Sep 18, 2007 11:29 pm -
Is it much to ask, For normal? Work all day And half the night for me, Wake up an hour earlier, Get…Tue Sep 18, 2007 8:19 pm -
Enigma It is near, very near. Yet far, oh so far. It’s harder than rock, Yet softer than silk It is…Tue Sep 18, 2007 4:15 pm -
Down falls the world Around your ears A house for you And all your peers Down comes the Town all fo…Mon Sep 17, 2007 11:10 pm
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Rushed moments in an adrenaline scramble for success, our kisses missing each other in an electrica…Sun Sep 16, 2007 11:13 am -
My first poem everSun Sep 16, 2007 5:46 am -
A sucky poemSat Sep 15, 2007 7:23 am -
They really DO come true...Fri Sep 14, 2007 3:26 am -
you know i'd sing for you if you weren't as elusive as golden rays on a wet manchester morning but …Fri Sep 14, 2007 2:03 am -
memories of 9/11Fri Sep 14, 2007 1:28 am -
Venomous Attraction The poison escapes your lips And encircles mine Threatening to enter The fumes …Thu Sep 13, 2007 8:54 pm -
A little...odd. (rated for Language)Thu Sep 13, 2007 9:47 am -
...I guess I just dont get it. The words are pretty enough, but I don't see the connection. L1 of S…Wed Sep 12, 2007 1:37 pm -
Hmm. Now, while there was some great stuff in this poem, it was too short to have overpowerewd the …Wed Sep 12, 2007 6:37 am
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The sun, a hot vessel sparking trees over water, does not concern itself with partings. This is mor…Wed Sep 12, 2007 2:56 am -
Sorry, my updated version My name is Amy, It’s my birthday today I lie here unmoving No one cares a…Tue Sep 11, 2007 11:28 pm -
Under My Skin I can't wait for tommorow And neither can you You are never under my skin You know? T…Tue Sep 11, 2007 2:17 am -
With faded glory, the wet cement lies, muddied and spewed with gutter waste; cracks like spidery we…Mon Sep 10, 2007 5:10 am -
A five shot Remington with pump action and a plastic magazine is my only companion in these halls. …Sun Sep 09, 2007 8:43 pm -
she calls me beautiful with quivering lips and trembling thighs; the lipsticks’ smeared on the pig;…Sun Sep 09, 2007 7:39 pm -
Watch the angels behind closed eyelids; they dance like spectrums of golden light, beautiful in swi…Sat Sep 08, 2007 10:27 pm -
My mind: filled with thoughts of love, Daring to escape in the form of passion, Revealing my hidden…Sat Sep 08, 2007 3:03 pm -
about writers blockSat Sep 08, 2007 2:55 pm
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the earth takes root the trees fall as mankind follows suit the end of all That's a very suitable, …Mon Sep 03, 2007 8:16 am -
Time ravages all things beautiful.Mon Sep 03, 2007 8:14 am -
relationshipsSun Sep 02, 2007 8:50 pm -
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