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RappingThu Oct 18, 2007 10:16 am -
My window is wide open. The truth hides behind my door. Those voices are in the shadows. Ideas sear…Wed Oct 17, 2007 10:47 pm -
Mother died Protecting me You became sad, angry You became a drunk. You kicked me You punched me Yo…Tue Oct 16, 2007 1:42 am -
You knew I needed it too. A break from me and you. We're faling apart. I gave you my heart. I need …Sun Oct 14, 2007 9:21 pm -
Her eyes red. The truth lead to tears. From everything she heard. She begged please, as she wiped h…Sun Oct 14, 2007 7:59 pm -
She was a diffrent girl. She made all the wrong choices. The rules never applied to her. She said s…Sun Oct 14, 2007 7:57 pm -
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The Re-WriteSat Oct 13, 2007 10:00 pm -
*temporarily removed*Sat Oct 13, 2007 8:14 pm -
You know what I'm saying. It's not so complicated. You use to love it and dear I still hate it. You…Sat Oct 13, 2007 5:51 pm -
Kind of emo but I wrotre it when I was really really sad.Sat Oct 13, 2007 2:42 am -
C&C welcomedFri Oct 12, 2007 7:34 pm -
Rough draft as the product of my boredom. Warning: freestyleThu Oct 11, 2007 9:11 pm -
Darkness creeps about the edges Fog rolls in dark and dank and smelling of rotten flesh Footsteps b…Wed Oct 10, 2007 7:58 pm
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First Poem PostWed Oct 10, 2007 7:56 pm -
That is simply thought provoking. I liked it :) I have no critiques; I just thought it was lovely.Mon Oct 08, 2007 6:35 pm -
I am one person among people, My goals are still unclear, Around me the world is unstable, And the …Mon Oct 08, 2007 5:51 pm -
about leting go of love and then forgeting how to loveSun Oct 07, 2007 9:36 pm -
Yay for poetry at one in the morning!Sun Oct 07, 2007 9:10 pm -
A street cuts into our skin and between our lives. Our memories hold steady the concrete wall of c…Sun Oct 07, 2007 12:31 pm -
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These poems are supposed to be read with the emphasis on the very last word. Otherwise, you'll miss…Sat Oct 06, 2007 10:05 pm -
Static, your voice smudges, sound waves connecting us, quavering like a rubber band stretched betwe…Sat Oct 06, 2007 7:15 pm -
Moisture falls down. Born from our eyes And killed on our shoulders. Could these be tears? Another …Sat Oct 06, 2007 2:37 am -
I do not fear the water The resting place of death Ships, unmoving, lay As if the day That killed t…Fri Oct 05, 2007 2:23 am -
I do not fear the dark The blackness of night All is shadows That creep soft Over AllFri Oct 05, 2007 2:17 am -
As with the first in the series, these poems are meant to be read with the emphasis on the last wor…Fri Oct 05, 2007 2:13 am -
Chose me darkness whispers Follow me, it said. And like the breath of the wind, I lost my way among…Thu Oct 04, 2007 3:45 pm -
and she says she's okay really, she's alright- and image of a broken star hangs above her head, a h…Thu Oct 04, 2007 2:20 pm -
No You wanted an answer And that's what you get. I said you should wait I might come soon. But you …Thu Oct 04, 2007 1:53 am -
I don't understand what you mean when you said (His weight is unimaginable -- a scarecrow's laugh) …Tue Oct 02, 2007 6:58 pm -
This is basically a poem about a really long fight and frienTue Oct 02, 2007 3:19 pm -
a sidestreet memorial in shambles; i, standing on the corner of these two suburban lanes, half dumb…Tue Oct 02, 2007 1:12 am -
how can you love someone who yields so easily to the crush of your body pushing her backwards, posi…Tue Oct 02, 2007 12:03 am -
Something a little different, pretty major. ------ Trophy wives on towering pedestals, On show for …Mon Oct 01, 2007 10:27 pm -
I'm forever raped- about to be publishedMon Oct 01, 2007 7:38 pm -
All Alone Alone in the darkness, Without a light in sight, Melancholy threatened to swallow me whol…Mon Oct 01, 2007 12:41 pm -
RandomSun Sep 30, 2007 10:08 pm -
A single drop of moisture Rolls down my cheek And falls down To die on my shoulder. The pattern rep…Sun Sep 30, 2007 2:07 am -
Everything doesn't have to be worthless Your broken heart can heal Everything has a purpose Don't l…Sun Sep 30, 2007 1:10 am -
always gets me into troubleSat Sep 29, 2007 3:20 am -
Very different from most of my poetry; not as happy or girlySat Sep 29, 2007 3:15 am -
Look at me, darling, this has gone far enough. I know you still love me. Don't try and run from it …Sat Sep 29, 2007 2:15 am -
I am a bibliophile Those simile to me know how the pages as yellow as the sun and faded as an old p…Sat Sep 29, 2007 1:55 am -
A satireThu Sep 27, 2007 9:27 pm -
Crit is welcome, but please also crit my other work it has no replies... http://www.writerfeed.com/…Thu Sep 27, 2007 6:56 am -
First of all, I'd like to say a thank you to those of you who critiqued the last poem that I posted…Thu Sep 27, 2007 4:54 am -
The sad poem im thinking of putting in my storyThu Sep 27, 2007 12:45 am -
A Dying Diction Billows, screams, oozes of tattooed regret; a sun-gazer of proportions, I tread sho…Wed Sep 26, 2007 10:40 pm -
entry for competitionWed Sep 26, 2007 10:38 pm
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