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Hiya! This has the basis for a reallllly interesting story and I can't wait to see how it unfolds! I love the way you start with the end because then ...

Hiya! This is amazing, it really feels like a campfire story and you're really good at creating a subtle lead up to the actual monster. Really good creepy foreshadowing. I ...

THIS IS AMAZING. I would 100% read more it reads like the start to a long dystopian series with infinite twists and turns. The world-building is fascinating and the whole ...

Woahhhhh this is super creepy. You are weirdly good at writing monsters, that thing is SCARY. I'll be honest you lost me a bit with the dragons, was it all ...

Hi there! This is super cute and I love the library setting, the MCs caring for younger siblings is also a nice touch as it makes them feel friendly and ...

Hi! This is lovely, you've captured a really magical yet universal experience of watching the rain. I wonder if some punctuation could be used to add emphasis, maybe before 'I ...

This is truly incredible, it really sums up so many complicated feelings in a way that is incredibly powerful. I love reading things like this that are speculative but with ...