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  • Poetry » General, General Re: please, could you meet me at the cemetery?

    This poem is dark, haunting, and genuinely evocative. It feels like a conversation between someone who is grieving and someone they can no longer reach. But what makes it interesting ...

    Oct 9
  • Poetry » Other, Realistic Re: Do you hope or do you despair?

    The poem has a nice questioning structure,it feels as if it interrogates someone’s conscience and the imagery is surreal do your fingers brush against the leaves that witnessed the unforgettable ...

    Oct 3
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: Eclipse's embrace

    This poem reminds of Icarus.you made it feel like a huge mythological universe and the imagery is so good! The poem has a actual progression showing story-like narration.the ending is ...

    Oct 3


Words are pale shadows of forgotten names. As names have power, words have power. Words can light fires in the minds of men. Words can wring tears from the hardest hearts.
— Patrick Rothfuss, The Name of the Wind