RedRidingBoots

You do not become part of the Void. Oooo, start strong! I like it! Maybe your body will continue, for some ultimately insignificant amount of time, smaller than a fraction ...

This almost gives me an Edgar Alan Poe vibe, and I'm loving it. I think you could lean into the idea that the feeling is clearly bothering her. Perhaps the ...

ooooooo! Okay, so I really liked this because anyone can relate to it. After all, it doesn't say what type of thoughts they are. However, I think you could improve ...

Dancing in the rain is a hope and dream of mine, so I love this poem; this is how I feel every time it rains because I also have no ...

You pull me close like water flows, I love the imagery of the pushing and pulling of the tide. I feel this love with every wave and much more, I'd ...

Are we the same person? I relate to your poetry so much that it actually scares me. Your writing is so beautiful, and it makes me feel less alone in ...

Yet another beautiful piece of poetry from moon1! Amazing work! If I could muster a guess, this one is about a breakup. Or perhaps trying to get over someone. The ...

when I would usually be crying my eyes out This line feels a bit clunky, and I would leave out "crying my eyes out" and instead simply say "crying". it ...

THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL! I love this; you must really like this person to write about him like this. I've never written poetry about admiring someone in a long time. ...

I'm going to start with the fact that I LOVE SNAKES, I have a ball python and his name is Boerne. anyway, I loved this story because YES OMG SNAKES ...

Oh boy... this one hit hard. This perfectly encapsulated anxiety and paranoia in an easily understandable way. I felt like I was reading Edgar Alan Poe (he's my favorite writer). ...

THIS HAS AMAZING POTENTIAL!! I'm intrigued, to say the least; my interest has been piqued. This kinda gives me the same vibe as the book "We Contain Multitudes" by Sarah ...

Howdy howdy! I'd like to say I love how this is going so far; I can see where the story is going, and I'm liking it. But I think we ...