Tikaya

I read your stickied note first. And I had a flashback to a story/poem I read on YWS a long while ago where a sweater too was the only memorabilia ...

Alright I already find the title without the spaces very unnerving so good job! Also the next verse that ends with their teeth gone, this deliberate pause just before we ...

Hia, this has been on my list since… I believe Candyhearts shouted it out. (yes I am one of these ppl that actually put stuff ppl recommend on their reading ...

I’ve had my eye on this story for a while! So glad I can finally catch up with it! I already love the italics intro! I like the overview you ...

Before we head into this chapter, I would like to note that I really, really don’t like it when ppl poison the well in their summaries or A/Ns. (Yes this ...

Hia Stardust, told you I’d be back =D Hmmm in generally it’s better if you start your chapter with an active phrasing. Like, passive phrasings do have their time and ...

Good morning Liv! I was loving the reviews you were writing and put your story on my TBR. And finally, I am here to check out your story~ I think ...

Hia Stardust, I just want to start with the fact that this is really short XD I mean yeah, very obvious and stuff but this feels more like the overarching ...

Hia Cerberus and welcome to the site. This story has been on my tbr for a while – I really like the summary 😊 That said, have you considered maybe ...

Hey friend, I’m feeling a little better than these last few days so let’s head into your story :3 Love the quote! Hah meta commentary in the first 2 paragraphs. ...

Hia, saw you doing a lot of reviews and decided to read your story :3 I think for your chosen genre, you have an excellent opening sentence. Love the description ...

Saw you posting about your story and hey, if anyone bothers to advertise a story, I will show up to give my 2 cents. First thing first, I think your ...

I must say I've never heard the phrase to vent out. What exactly does it mean? In library, not, in the library? I must say I love myself an opinionated ...

Hia Catssss! Two preliminary things: 1) The chapters in your portfolio are not ordered correctly. Might want to fix that so ppl can just click “Next” when they do decide ...

Well looks like I’m reading and reviewing before you can get to mine xp I’m a little confused, last time you ended on the song which now you’re not even ...