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heyy therwormwriter, thank you for the review! I agree that this poem is a little bit too cryptic - how can red suns turn a sea green lol? I wrote ...

thanks for your review!!! you're so kind : )

thank you so much for your detailed review, Jade! I'll keep the stylistic notes in mind : )

You're not reading too much into it! You've caught the message that I was trying to convey in this poem perfectly :)) thanks you for your kind comment

I loved the rich, rich language in this poem! I'll review it tomorrow because I'm so tired today... For what is speed but panic made kinetic, what haste but terror ...

i accidentally sent this (facepalming)

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