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Re: The Last Argument Between Two Numbers
I really loved the idea behind this poem. Turning Zero and One into characters who argue about which one matters more was such a creative way to talk about opposites ...
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Re: The Nightmare I Didn't Tell You
This poem has such a dark and emotional storyline. I really liked how the truth was slowly revealed instead of being explained all at once. The guilt in the speaker’s ...
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Re: The Cartographer of Tomorrow
This was such an interesting way to describe the future. I really liked the idea of Tomorrow hiring a mapmaker, because it makes something impossible to predict feel almost like ...
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Re: Simply Lovely
I really enjoyed the energy in this poem! The short lines and rhymes make it feel fast-paced, which fits the racing theme perfectly. I especially liked the repeated “one day ...
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Re: THE WEEK I COULDN'T BEND
I really liked how this poem takes us through the week almost like we are experiencing it alongside you. The days being mentioned one by one made the memories feel ...
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Re: Why do I write? (Late night ramblings; essay)
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Sep 29
This essay starts with a deceptively simple question—“Why do I write?”—but turns into something much deeper about art, purpose, self-liberation, expectations, and mortality. I especially liked -
Re: Those delightful fruits
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I really enjoyed how this poem begins with such a gentle and affectionate description of apricots, making them seem almost innocent and magical. The repeated use of “Apricots” also gives ... -
Re: Who I will !
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Sep 29
I really liked how this poem explores identity, existence, and the way the world shapes who we become. The repetition of “Who I will” gives the poem a questioning rhythm ... -
Re: The Window - The 2nd Letter
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Sep 28
I really enjoyed reading this! The narrator’s voice is what stood out to me the most. The way they speak directly to the “stranger” makes the whole piece feel like ... -
Re: circles
I really liked reading this piece. It is extremely raw and emotional, and I think the way you wrote the thoughts feels very realistic. I especially liked how you used ...
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Re: Greedy
I really loved reading this! The honesty in this poem is what stood out to me the most. I really liked how you explored different kinds of “greed,” not just ...
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Re: Not fair
I really enjoyed reading this! I love how the phrase “all’s fair in love and war” keeps returning throughout the poem, because each repetition adds more intensity to the message. ...
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Re: A little less blue
I really enjoyed reading this! The mystery surrounding the stranger immediately caught my attention, especially because he seems to see something in the painting that the narrator completely misses. I
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Re: Therapist Friend
I really liked this! The way you described being the “therapist friend” felt really raw and relatable. I especially liked the idea of people coming to you when they need ...
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Re: The Last Tree That Remembered Winter
This was really beautiful and emotional. I loved how the old tree remembers the snow while the younger trees only know it as a rumor. The idea of memories slowly ...
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