They write of love as thunder in the skies,
As sweeping storms that catch us unaware,
As sudden fires that leap from earth to clouds
With wild abandon and a reckless flare.
To me, you are the coffee in the chill,
The steady anchor when the room is loud,
The warmth of fingers brushing past my own
In quiet corners far away from crowds.
It’s how you stay when things are hard to hold,
It’s how you care without a need for praise—
It’s every small, invisible embrace
That weaves a lifetime out of ordinary days.
So let me tell you now, before the years
Have worn our youthful edges into stone:
You are the safest home I’ve ever known,
And loving you is all I’ve ever known.
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This poem is beautiful and very well written. And Your poetry caught my attention through the emotions you have woven into each verse of this beautiful masterpiece. Every line feels like a quiet reflection of something deeply human, echoing in the space between the words long after the reading is done. You have a rare gift for turning ordinary feelings into art that lingers, and I hope you never stop sharing these pieces with the world. The way you capture the delicate balance between vulnerability and strength is genuinely captivating. It feels as though each stanza opens a window directly into the soul, allowing the reader to experience your thoughts, heartbreaks, and triumphs right alongside you.
Your mastery of rhythm and language transforms what could be simple thoughts into a profound sensory journey. Thank you for putting into words the things so many of us feel but can rarely express.keep writing!! And try to write in different forms too you are so good at writing.