I love you more than words could describe
A quiet comfort in your warm embrace.
You are my home, my heart and my light,
The sweetest thought that carries through the night.
It’s in the way you smile and how you care,
The simple peace of knowing that you’re there and I’m yours and your mine.
My heart is yours, completely and in full—
An endless, deep, and gravity-like pull.
With every day, this feeling only grows,
Far deeper than a casual affection shows.
I love you to the moon, the stars, and back,
A boundless love that holds no doubt or lack.
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I think this is a rather direct sweet expression of affection. I appreciate the emphasis on the quieter aspects of love: the consistency, safety, and little gestures that often go unnoticed.
I'd have loved to encounter more distinctive, personal imagery, something that gives us a glimpse into the particular experiences that make this love yours.
Nevertheless, the sincerity of the piece is quite evident, and I think you've communicated your intentions beautifully.
Lucky Matthew. 😂
Aw thanks and haha yeah lucky him🤣✨💕
This poem is beautiful and very well written. And Your poetry caught my attention through the emotions you have woven into each verse of this beautiful masterpiece. Every line feels like a quiet reflection of something deeply human, echoing in the space between the words long after the reading is done. You have a rare gift for turning ordinary feelings into art that lingers, and I hope you never stop sharing these pieces with the world. The way you capture the delicate balance between vulnerability and strength is genuinely captivating. It feels as though each stanza opens a window directly into the soul, allowing the reader to experience your thoughts, heartbreaks, and triumphs right alongside you.
Your mastery of rhythm and language transforms what could be simple thoughts into a profound sensory journey. Thank you for putting into words the things so many of us feel but can rarely express.
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I kinda of thought I saw this somewhere just.. her reply I meant
Oh um ok
It might be because I say similar things about poems ig