Published November 16, 2011
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It's a great story you've got here
It's so sad, Clayton died?! Ah, well, it's still awesome, and I love how you went from past into present tense in the chapter, and the characters are just...well, pretty awesome. Great story, and it's really original, too, so keep up the good work!!
Haha Vincent Quest is my name. Thanks a lot for your review.
I love this story, absolutely love it. I have nothing to say but "wow"
, in.
I like how you started it as a sort of flashback and then put it to present day.
It was fast paced but not too fast paced, with enough details too bring the reader, or me
I don't get the the actual title though. "Vincent Quest" I don't know what that is supposed to mean, and nothing corrolates (sorry for the horrible spelling) to it in the story.
Other than that, I think I can say I know why you had this copyrighted, or at least put that on ther to scare people lol
i'm definitely following you.