Please critique this, as harshly as you wish. Most of the plot is completed and any plot holes that you may find aren’t necessarily plot holes, I was simply unable to find a good way to explain them. If you have any questions, feel free to ask them, and I’d be happy to answer. This writing may seem difficult to read, and it is meant to be that way, though I am trying to improve on readability.
Prepare to ruin your first impression with my awful prologue ^^
TW for abuse, violence, coercive control.In a world where an ancient Warriors Code governs those born with elemental abilities, two prophesied warriors — Keahi Koa, the last surviving dragonkin, and Anwar Junaid, a halfblood Shadow wielder — are supposed to save the continent of Embia from a war that's tearing it apart. But the most dangerous threat isn't the enemy king. It's the dead man living inside their minds.
*From Beyond Time* unravels the seams of reality, tearing humanity from the center of the universe and leaving it on the edge of an abyss of the unknown. As the most definitive pronouncements of science begin to lose their meaning in the darkness of existence, the boundaries of time dissolve; past and future cease to be two disconnected ends and become fragments of an incomprehensible whole. Minds that have lived for centuries without knowing of one another, lives long since extinguished, and events yet to unfold converge around an invisible bond.
Set across England and Wales, Crawlers details the lives of children now adults have been infected with a parasitical virus which turns them into flesh-hungry alien zombies
You have to write the book that wants to be written. And if the book will be too difficult for grown-ups, then you write it for children. — Madeleine L'Engle, Author
