Hello, listeners. Welcome to this celebration of being a month here.
(Sigh)
I’ve… I’ve finally settled into a structure—made of marble, as always—that has what you might call a roof.
It doesn’t seem to rain here, but it’s better to be safe than sorry. You never know. I’ve tried to cover the gaps with whatever I have on hand, but, unfortunately, there don’t seem to be any materials other than marble. I’ve looked around the area—it’s easy to get lost here; everything looks the same. Except for the statues. But, well, you know how it is.
Hmm… I’ve also finished the potato chips I had stashed in my backpack. Not that I’m actually hungry, though… the good thing is that I brought a few books along. Only a couple, but they serve as a distraction, at least.
But it’s not all bad news! I’ve found…
(Sound of Joan’s footsteps)
…a friend, and a new addition to this program.
(Patting sound against marble)
His name is Pepe. And, naturally, he’s a marble statue of a figure sitting down, staring off into nothingness…
But, for some reason, I have no idea why, I think I… kind of like him.
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Shalt we commence with the wretched S’more?
Top Graham Cracker - The narrator is in a marble structure and has run out of chips. Tis’ a pity, but at least they have a friend! A statue named Pepe! Surely, things will look up…right?
Slightly Burnt Marshmallow - I have no recommendations to make as of right now, but if you would like to edit this, you may.
Chocolate Bar - I like that the narrator can’t find anyone or anything else here, this really puts down how big and lonely such a place is. I also like that they’re started talking to the statues. They’re descending into madness but in a very casual way. (I take it that Joan is the narrator’s name, but I just want to make sure.)
Closing Graham Cracker - Overall, a lovely addition to this collection of recordings! I’ll be sure to read the next part to find out more about this strange world. I have enjoyed reading this and…
I wish you a fantastic day/night! ^v^