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thank you for the lovely review, creeper! I love that you understood the nature of the poem

thank you so much for your review, cyan!

text version: four. mayibeexcused one night, after dinner (we ate lamb with our hands) my father stepped out of the room and did not come back. we searched, knowing the ...

text version: three. root i am thirteen. i run my hands through my hair and search for the perfect strand. it is coarse, thick, and feels wiry as i run ...

text version: two. brushyourteeth the house had no mirrors. one night i was alone, picking stringy bits of meat out from between my molars. (her (my) fangs had not grown ...

text version: one. dinnertimedinnertimedinnertime i remember the first time they made me (not me) eat meat. they (them) sat around, their teeth gone orange in the candlelight (it was my ...

I do get the idea behind wanting to do that, but it's best to learn for yourself! I'm sure everyone here can give tips if you're struggling with something! Some ...

sorry, yes that was me! i realised i wasn't following anyone and tried to find people from here XD I really like your content!

i shall bookmark for later! but the premise sounds good so far !!

haha, honestly, I get it! I think it's great you can format your raw thoughts like a poem anyway. I always struggled with that XD but hey, maybe it'll inspire ...

Thanks for the review. If you used AI in this review, please don't ever paste my work into the AI itself. I didn't consent to that.

thanks for the review, moon. Can I ask what specific parts you thought were uneven / didn't flow as well, specifically? This is 7 years old at this point, so ...

thanks for the review. This is actually something I posted 7 years ago, not recent, so I didn't find it after a long time ahha, it was posted a year ...

Thanks for the feedback dom! I agree with the opening paragraph needing to be edited to I’ll take a look at that. As for Marnie in the wheelchair: this is ...

no problem! It was amazing anyway, but even better now!