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Hey, EveryUsernameTaken! I really enjoyed how much energy this story has! Right away, Amelia and Ryan feel excited, and that excitement makes the beginning fun to read. I like how ...

Hello, SooSoo! First off, wow, this is such an intense scene! The narrator’s voice is really sharp and bitter, but also vulnerable in a way that slowly reveals itself as ...

Hi there, Liminality! I would've reviewed this in the form of a poem, but I've been in a slump! First off, I really love the atmosphere of this poem! It ...

Hello, MAC809! I think you have a really dramatic and imaginative premise here! The world feels dark and full of danger, which I love, and I can tell you have ...

Hey! I am out of class finally, so I wanted to check this out for you! I really like your voice! You mentioned that you enjoy descriptive sentences, and I ...

Hi there, ziya! Welcome to the site!

Hey again! You were right that this does reveal a lot! I was not expecting that the tragedy may have been avoidable from the beginning, or at least known to ...

Hey, Dom! I'm here to check this out for you! I do have to say this is a really ambitious story, and I mean that in the best way. I ...

Hi there, mous3! This is very emotional! I really think you've captured a monotonous life quite well, and I think the narrator is applicable to so many different people and ...

Hello, anthonykandi! Welcome to YWS! What I enjoy most about this story is that you take a very well-known myth and turn it into something more! For instance, I love ...

Hi there, charvi! Welcome to YWS! ^-^ I hope you love it here! You laughed out loud And I loved that sound. Love this! This is such a simple moment, ...

Hi again! I think this part does a really nice job shifting the story into the wider world of Casat. The earlier part of the chapter had a lot of ...

Hey again! I'm back for part two! I really enjoyed this! I think this chapter has a very different feeling from the funeral chapter, but in a good way. The ...

Hi there, DomTheDumb! You're such a prolific writer, so I figured I would check this story out for you! c: I'm excited to see what you bring to YWS! Today, ...

Hi, creeperfeverdreams! This is a little out of what I typically read, but I wanted to check it out! ^-^ Overall, I think this is a really dramatic story, and ...