Lightswitch

my fav line: 'let her be the queen she could never be. Don't tempt her' the poem is written in 3rd person which makes it looks like an outsider understanding ...

This is such an amazing story!!! The concept of a world without time left me speechless; its so thoughtful and deep, the kind of stories that make readers ponder after ...

Lovely debut! :) I love this poem, especially the first stanza: Tears began to drop and fall As I recalled your eyes out shining all. This is such a beautiful ...

Hey! I love your poem and the reflective thoughts included in them :) You've raised a very good point. And it can be asked in many different ways: *why* do ...

Hey! Since everyone is introducing themselves: I'm Lightswitch. :) I joined about the same time as you so we're both newbies. I think... this poem literally changed the way I ...

wow! I'm so impressed the whole poem is so well structured and it flows super well. I think mentioning the lamp with a honey colour is the best sentence. Its ...

this is a crazy good poem!!! Its so perfect I wouldn't change anything. I love the turning point at 'little shining screen you love' its almost like the flow of ...

I love this short eerie mini story. I can't stand gruesome imageries so this is the right kind of eeriness for me :) the line 'and in empty rooms' creeped ...

Wow~~ I can feel the love translated in this poem I love the overarching theme of 1) holding hands which symbolise unity and 2) freedom I also adore how you ...

I really enjoyed the first chapter of this book :) and I specifically loved the phrase 'What on Embia' ;) I love the way you revealed the apprentice relationship between ...

ooooo I love this poem!! Its such a good idea to use indents < you put to indicate start of the paragraph. IDK if everyone else does that but its ...

Welcome to the YWS! This is a great debut :) as someone who lived in cities this poem connected very deeply with me. I loved 'citylight-gazing' at night from a ...