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wow! The characters look so cool! What language is this? Lightswitch.

thank you! You interpreted the story so accurately! Lighswitch.

thank you!! You're definitely pointed out the major mistakes and tense errors in there; I'll be sure to edit those parts the 'fairies and dragons' were written to resolve the ...

thank you for your review! I feel like I know how to create the suspense better after reading your advices. :) Lightswitch.

Sorry I had to resolve it with fairies and dragons... I keep loosing sleep. Did we notice when it turned happy?

thank you! I can see why you said tamagotchi :)

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed! I'll definitely make it longer :) And your interpretation of it was exactly what I had in mind Have a nice day/night^v^ Lightswitch.

Was it effective or confusing how I changed my perspective at the end 2 paragraphs? It was deliberate, but did it sound weird? thank you for reading. Lightswitch.

Hi! Thank you for your review. May I ask what the YWS S'more method is? Whats slightly burnt marshmallow?? I'm glad you enjoyed reading it! Lightswtich.

Who didn't listen to the sour sounds spat to see her Sink and Drown change to Who didn't listen to those to doubt spat to see her Sink and Drown

thank you for your review jade! And for pointing out the vagueness, I will definitely keep that in mind. I used 'sour sounds' so create a little sibilance to make ...

thank you so much! that means so much to me! Its my friends birthday soon so I'm writing her a poem :) but i guess it could be for any ...

Hey guys any comment welcome~~ Please help me out I’m not sure if this short story fully communicates what is in the description. Thank you Lightswitch

any reviews welcome ~~

Hi Jaye I will definitely change the first part thank you for pointing out the contradictions. End of that sentence it was supposed to be 'left the room cheering, cheering...' ...