PikeFisher4Ever

This is a good piece of poetry. Its as if someone either lost a close friend or themselves, and both are understandable. I would recommend adding some more imagery but ...

This is a very beautiful piece of poetry, and as someone who has lost a friend who I was quite close with, I understand the vulnerability in the feelings. In ...

This has been a quite interesting read, despite starting it in chapter 8. The detail is appreciated as well as the suspense, I look forward to reading more of your ...

I would also like to note that while reading this it needs a bit more feeling, at the beginning of the short writing it is quite clear that your character ...