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Re: Nobody Is Coming
This piece is a powerful and thought-provoking reflection on waiting for opportunities, recognition, and someone to change your life. The writer uses an extended metaphor of a train station to ...
Oct 23 -
Re: My Mistake
I really like how this poem uses references to Greek tragedy and the devil on the speaker’s shoulder to explore blame, guilt and the idea of good versus evil. The ...
Oct 23 -
Re: Glitch in the System
I really like how this poem shows denial and desperation through such simple words. The repetition of “Please” makes the speaker sound increasingly desperate for someone to tell them that ...
Oct 23 -
Re: inconvenience
this is actually so heartbreaking :( the way it lists all the different ways someone might feel like a burden, from their parents arguing to their friends worrying about them, ...
Oct 21 -
Re: Before the Thoughts Fade
i love how this feels like someone genuinely reaching out to another person and wanting to understand them, not just their words but everything they keep hidden behind them. the ...
Oct 21 -
Re: Can someone save me?
Moon, this genuinely hurts to read because you can feel how much pain and conflict there is behind every line, especially the contrast between wanting to die and wanting to ...
Oct 20 -
Re: The Smallness of Things
I actually really like how weird and random this poem is, but in a way that somehow makes sense. The bit about arguing with shoes over the direction of Tuesday ...
Oct 20 -
Re: Am i dead?
I really, really like your work! The repetition of “I don’t know if I’m alive or not” makes the poem feel increasingly unsettling, and I love how the imagery changes ...
Oct 17 -
Re: Aphasia
Ooh this is rly cool!! My favourite part is the line “Just where my heart lies it melts into sheer red” that part rly hits hard idk why but yea ...
Oct 17 -
Re: When creativity dies
i genuinely relate to this SO SO MUCH omg especially the part about wanting to create but feeling like nothing you make is ever good enough, because i think that ...
Oct 17 -
Re: The fault is mine
omg this actually hurts my heart smm i love how emotional and personal this feels, especially the way the poem explores regret and all the things you wish you couldve ...
Oct 17 -
Re: Still Life with Lamplight
i genuinely love this so much omg 😭🤎 the imagery is absolutely beautiful, especially the way the ordinary little things are described as something almost sacred. i love how peaceful ...
Oct 16 -
Re: Monster Under the Bed
i genuinely love this so much omg 😭 i relate to this in so many ways and i think thats what makes it hit so hard for me. the way ...
Oct 16 -
Re: Birthday Lady
i really love how this poem seems to be about a birthday without actually saying it directly!! the way it mentions the candle flames and how the girl has grown ...
Oct 16 -
Re: The Embers Glow Again
I really love how this poem shows that even after losing someone or going through grief theres still hope for things to get better. the imagery is so beautiful and ...
Oct 16
