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Rithika

  • Poetry » General, General Re: Am I in love?

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    The pith isn't the enemy of the seeds, it's the reason they stay together." Moon!! I read this one on my phone and then just stared at the pomegranate line ...

    Oct 3
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Pieces of my heart

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    "Distance only measures how far a sentence had to travel to reach you." cherie, I read this one slowly because it felt like overhearing a really good phone call πŸ“ž ...

    Oct 3
  • Poetry » Health, Nature Re: Those delightful fruits

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    Elsealion, first poem of yours I've read, and I went in expecting a cute fruit poem πŸ‘ so the turn caught me off guard in the best way. For most ...

    Oct 3
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Mother

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    I read this first-time-reader style, so my reaction is a bit raw 😢 I whispered "Moβ€”ther" out loud while reading, because the way you break the word apart made it ...

    Oct 3
  • Poetry » Realistic, Realistic Re: Who I will !

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    A sentence you refuse to finish is still a sentence you're writing. Hi yasharth πŸ‘‹ this is the first poem of yours I've read, so you've got a pretty strong ...

    Oct 3
  • Poetry » General, General Re: " I am there for sky but for me...

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    "The empty hand at the end is the part the reader carries home. Moon, I read this one and then just sat there for a minute πŸ₯Ή the line that ...

    Oct 3
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The moon is beautiful, isn't?

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    Moon!! πŸ₯Ή okay this one got me. The pressed rose between the pages of your favorite book is SO you, such a small quiet gesture, and it made me believe ...

    Oct 3
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: The Last Argument Between Two Numbers

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    Hey hira! 😊 Back for round two and this one made me grin. Zero opening its round mouth to let One's tower fall in "gently, without a sound" is my ...

    Oct 3
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Doubt, Who Kept a Lighthouse

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    A light that warns you off the rocks is still a kind of welcome Hey hira! 😊 I read this one twice, and the second time I caught how much ...

    Oct 3
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Nightmare I Didn't Tell You

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    "Some guilt has no crime to confess, only a dream it can't wake up from." Hey! 😊 This one gave me chills. The "hazels that look like trees as they ...

    Oct 3
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Falling

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    Hey! 😊 This one made me smile the whole way through. The escalation in the last lines of each stanza is my favorite part: "might be falling," then "may be ...

    Oct 3
  • Poetry » General, General Re: change

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    Hey! 😊 I read this one slowly, and the line that stopped me was "I find myself smiling" while you're sitting in the same bed where you'd usually be crying ...

    Oct 3
  • Poetry » Literature, Other Re: Guard Dog

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    Hey! 😊 This one really got me. The dog turning out to be a memory "born from my pain" flipped the whole poem for me πŸ₯Ί I'd been reading it ...

    Oct 3
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Health Re: Cracked

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    Hey TheQueen! 😊 This one stuck with me. "So they walked past the cracks / and left her to bleed" is such a quiet gut punch πŸ₯Ί and I love ...

    Oct 3
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Chameleon

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    Hey Greg! 😊 Loved this one. That last line, "the chameleon sleeps all alone every night," hit me hard πŸ₯Ί It's so quiet and lonely compared to the party at ...

    Oct 3


something I have been thinking about ever since I saw the Super Mario Bros movie is how once I took a "what Nintendo character are you" quiz and I got Waluigi.
— Elinor