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Re: Am I in love?
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The pith isn't the enemy of the seeds, it's the reason they stay together." Moon!! I read this one on my phone and then just stared at the pomegranate line ... -
Re: Pieces of my heart
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"Distance only measures how far a sentence had to travel to reach you." cherie, I read this one slowly because it felt like overhearing a really good phone call π ... -
Re: Those delightful fruits
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Elsealion, first poem of yours I've read, and I went in expecting a cute fruit poem π so the turn caught me off guard in the best way. For most ... -
Re: Mother
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I read this first-time-reader style, so my reaction is a bit raw πΆ I whispered "Moβther" out loud while reading, because the way you break the word apart made it ... -
Re: Who I will !
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Oct 3
A sentence you refuse to finish is still a sentence you're writing. Hi yasharth π this is the first poem of yours I've read, so you've got a pretty strong ... -
Re: " I am there for sky but for me...
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"The empty hand at the end is the part the reader carries home. Moon, I read this one and then just sat there for a minute π₯Ή the line that ... -
Re: The moon is beautiful, isn't?
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Moon!! π₯Ή okay this one got me. The pressed rose between the pages of your favorite book is SO you, such a small quiet gesture, and it made me believe ... -
Re: The Last Argument Between Two Numbers
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Hey hira! π Back for round two and this one made me grin. Zero opening its round mouth to let One's tower fall in "gently, without a sound" is my ... -
Re: Doubt, Who Kept a Lighthouse
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A light that warns you off the rocks is still a kind of welcome Hey hira! π I read this one twice, and the second time I caught how much ... -
Re: The Nightmare I Didn't Tell You
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"Some guilt has no crime to confess, only a dream it can't wake up from." Hey! π This one gave me chills. The "hazels that look like trees as they ... -
Re: Falling
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Hey! π This one made me smile the whole way through. The escalation in the last lines of each stanza is my favorite part: "might be falling," then "may be ... -
Re: change
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Hey! π I read this one slowly, and the line that stopped me was "I find myself smiling" while you're sitting in the same bed where you'd usually be crying ... -
Re: Guard Dog
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Hey! π This one really got me. The dog turning out to be a memory "born from my pain" flipped the whole poem for me π₯Ί I'd been reading it ... -
Re: Cracked
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Hey TheQueen! π This one stuck with me. "So they walked past the cracks / and left her to bleed" is such a quiet gut punch π₯Ί and I love ... -
Re: The Chameleon
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Hey Greg! π Loved this one. That last line, "the chameleon sleeps all alone every night," hit me hard π₯Ί It's so quiet and lonely compared to the party at ...
