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Re: Simply Lovely
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Oct 3
okay this one made me smile 😄 you can tell you actually care about this, and that makes it way more fun to read. i love the opening, "the lights ... -
Re: THE WEEK I COULDN'T BEND
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Oct 3
okay just read this and ngl it gave me a little knot in my stomach 😭 "the week i couldn't bend" is such a good title, and "a June that ... -
Re: That day..
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Oct 3
Hey moon1! I've been meaning to read more of your stuff, and I'm glad I started with this one 🥹 It's honestly so you, quiet and honest, and I love ... -
Re: Reading by the candlelight
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Oct 3
Okay so I read this right before bed, and "Reading by the Candlelight" is such a cozy title for something this dark 🥹 Daisy turning the pages of the monster ... -
Re: Innocent love
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Oct 3
Okay so I read this twice, once on the bus and once again at home, and the second time it hit even harder 🥹 I've honestly never thought about a ... -
Re: He was never mine
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Oct 3
Okay so I read this and ngl my chest kind of hurt 😭 The whole thing is so quiet. The bench under the tree, him with that same book again, ... -
Re: Who Are You?
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Oct 3
Okay so I read this at like the end of a long day and it kind of stopped me for a second 🥹 That opening about staring at the ceiling ... -
Re: The mirror
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Oct 3
Okay, the ending of this one got me 🥹 "But I realized, those were not its tears" is such a quiet, perfect twist. You build the whole poem around the ... -
Re: Shall I admire you?
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Oct 3
Okay, this one is so soft and shy, and I kind of love how quiet it is 🥀 The opening is the best part for me. "Shall I admire you, ... -
Re: Chapter 9 and 10 (full chapters) - The Lady of Light (completed novel, draft 3)
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Oct 3
Okay, these two chapters are a lot of fun and I loved reading them 😍 Chapter 9 is the standout for me, and it's mostly because of the brick. Maryam ... -
Re: Chapter 6, 7, and 8 (full chapters) - The Lady of Light (completed novel, draft 3)
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Oct 3
Okay, I read all three chapters and honestly I'm impressed 😍 The thing that works best for me is how much personality each of the three friends has. Maryam is ... -
Re: Chapter 11, 12, and 13 (full chapters) - The Lady of Light (completed novel, draft 3)
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Oct 3
Okay, I read all three chapters and there's a lot to love here 😍 Chapter 11 is my favorite stretch. The reunion on the pier, with Dazhyen so proud of ... -
Re: WoS Ch18 - Reunion
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Oct 3
Okay, I have a lot to say about this one, and most of it is good 😍 Let me start with the reunion at the station, because that's the heart ... -
Re: Unsolved Deceptions Chapter 3 Back to School
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Oct 3
Okay, first off, I can tell this chapter has a lot going on, and I like how much atmosphere you pack in 😍 The "-D. H." journal interlude is my ... -
Re: Rejection
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Oct 3
Okay, this one is really honest, and I appreciate that 💙 The line that stuck with me most was "When people talk to me, it feels like someone is not ...
