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Re: “Just because we’re dead kids doesn’t mean that we’re stupid”
I love this. The style, the sarcasm of the narrator, her tone !
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Re: Prologue
Yeah, I’ve already finished writing the whole thing, and I’m even on my second story….
Oct 24 -
Re: Prologue
Hey Tikaya! Thank you for your feedback! I agree that this was a really short “Prologue”, more of an Intro, but I wasn’t sure what else to put into it…as ...
Oct 24 -
Re: A short summary of "I am Hollow"
Omg I love the rhythm in this short intro! The repetition of “I am hollow” feels empty and monotone, in my opinion, and I think this really adds to the ...
Oct 24 -
Re: Prologue
Thank you for your feedback! This was really nice to read—the character on the cover is Myosotis, but Clo will definitely be getting his character design shown as well, just ...
Oct 24 -
Re: Chapter 1
Thank you for your feedback! This is quite helpful! I know I didn’t make it quite clear, but just in case you like this story and plan on reading the ...
Oct 24 -
Re: They don't know about me
Your poem is beautiful and relatable.
Oct 23