Therwormwriter

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The last three lined reference the biblical idea of God being an artist and us being the art, but kind of pulling away from that, I do not wish to ...

The even I is deliberate, I honestly just like it more. For the second thing, the contract that my hands are empty, is basically saying, my hands are clasped together, ...

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thank you! I'm very happy you enjoyed it! honestly I do not really care much for grammar except when its a reallllly stupid mistake, but I fixed foods and a ...

Thanks again!

Thanks =D

As a frying pan I really enjoyed this poem, the flow is chefs kiss and I dream of having a poem this memorizable

This reminds me a lot of the song coles response by yaelokre, which is really awesome. This is such a tragic thing as well, giving up yourself for the sake ...

Thank you very much! This is honestly one of my darker poems bit it's also more recent as i have been learning to lean into the dark to amplify the ...

I'm glad that you enjoyed it, and am both sorry and happy you are able to relate.

I changed it, and I agree it helps a lot, it makes it feel as stilted as the rest of it.

Thanks for your suggestion!

This is dark, but I love the maggot imagery, it's so gross but works so well. It is overall good and worth rereading!