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Re: Not An Average Festival: India's Nine Nights of Divine Drama
I’ve had my eye on this story for a while! So glad I can finally catch up with it! I already love the italics intro! I like the overview you ...
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Re: Chapter 2
Before we head into this chapter, I would like to note that I really, really don’t like it when ppl poison the well in their summaries or A/Ns. (Yes this ...
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Re: Chapter 1
Hia Stardust, told you I’d be back =D Hmmm in generally it’s better if you start your chapter with an active phrasing. Like, passive phrasings do have their time and ...
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Re: Summer is dead to me
Good morning Liv! I was loving the reviews you were writing and put your story on my TBR. And finally, I am here to check out your story~ I think ...
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Re: Prologue
Hia Stardust, I just want to start with the fact that this is really short XD I mean yeah, very obvious and stuff but this feels more like the overarching ...
Oct 24 -
Re: The Colony Seven
Hia Cerberus and welcome to the site. This story has been on my tbr for a while – I really like the summary 😊 That said, have you considered maybe ...
Oct 23 -
Re: The Prophet of God [Ch. XXIV, Nine]
Hey friend, I’m feeling a little better than these last few days so let’s head into your story :3 Love the quote! Hah meta commentary in the first 2 paragraphs. ...
Oct 22 -
Re: Sometimes I miss the moonlight
Hia, saw you doing a lot of reviews and decided to read your story :3 I think for your chosen genre, you have an excellent opening sentence. Love the description ...
Oct 21 -
Re: Is it stranger danger
Saw you posting about your story and hey, if anyone bothers to advertise a story, I will show up to give my 2 cents. First thing first, I think your ...
Oct 20 -
Re: The Quiet Path
I must say I've never heard the phrase to vent out. What exactly does it mean? In library, not, in the library? I must say I love myself an opinionated ...
Oct 19 -
Re: Chapter 12
Hia Catssss! Two preliminary things: 1) The chapters in your portfolio are not ordered correctly. Might want to fix that so ppl can just click “Next” when they do decide ...
Oct 18 -
Re: Sunlight Through Concrete Rain - Part 7 (still WIP but now we're almost there!)
Well looks like I’m reading and reviewing before you can get to mine xp I’m a little confused, last time you ended on the song which now you’re not even ...
Oct 17 -
Re: Mara’s weird feeling.
Heyo and welcome to the site! I always advise that you should find a good title and summary for your story because that shows that you care . Writing good ...
Oct 16 -
Re: Look Up - Part 2 of 3 (A "Sunlight" short-story)
Decided to read this next. The dice have no power over me hahaha I wanna know just what kinda thing he allowed into his body now. I feel like Jeeva ...
Oct 15 -
Re: Look Up - Part 1 of 3 (A "Sunlight" short-story)
Ok so you were a bit obscure in your wishes (links ☹ ) so I guess I’ll read this one now. Good summary 😊 I didn’t know you could use ...
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