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Re: Look Up - Part 2 of 3 (A "Sunlight" short-story)
Decided to read this next. The dice have no power over me hahaha I wanna know just what kinda thing he allowed into his body now. I feel like Jeeva ...
Oct 15 -
Re: Look Up - Part 1 of 3 (A "Sunlight" short-story)
Ok so you were a bit obscure in your wishes (links ☹ ) so I guess I’ll read this one now. Good summary 😊 I didn’t know you could use ...
Oct 14 -
Re: Staring at a Wall Chapters One and Two
Good morning! I have had this on my list for months now and finally, I have arrived to take a look =D Let’s see if you can dazzle me with ...
Oct 14 -
Re: The Angel of Vengeance: Into Our Hands
Good Morning Book, came for another of my book marks (hehe) I think your summary for the chapter is very captivating already! Hmmm tho I do think you might not ...
Oct 13 -
Re: TEETH /2018: chapter 3
Well well well took me a moment, but I am back for Ch3! I wasn’t… even aware this was a code name lol I like the first paragraph. It neatly ...
Oct 12 -
Re: Chapter 11
Good morning Catsss~ Ohh I am intrigued. The clicking of machines? It felt so tribal all the time, so now I wanna know more abt their technology! I hear heavy ...
Oct 12 -
Re: Earth
Hia! I finally have a bit more time and decided to read some of my bookmarks and yours is the first that came up :3 I'm not sure why you ...
Oct 11 -
Re: Shoplifting Vampires (2.1)
Last one! Hi Rev and hi Rev =D I feel like your opening line… doesn’t really work to establish the scene. It’s been 2 chapters since we last saw these ...
Oct 10 -
Re: Shoplifting Vampires (2.0)
Review 3 ~ (Yeah I don’t rly have the energy for more than one review a day atm) Ah we are back in the present. I appreciate that more. I ...
Oct 9 -
Re: Shoplifting Vampires (1.1)
Ah and here I thought “1.0” stood for Vers. 1.0, foreshadowing the eventual rewrite =D Flashback time, here we go! Ohaaaa and casual display of telepathy. I like it! Tho ...
Oct 8 -
Re: Shoplifting Vampires (1.0)
Heya Rev! Let’s read about female Rev for once =D I dig the first sentence XD But the follow up does sound like typical September so idk what the deal ...
Oct 7 -
Re: Ascent
Hia and welcome! I would love to know how you made your cover art! It looks interest~ Let me start with a general writing tip: Do not skip out on ...
Oct 6 -
Re: Jelly
Hello great fish! I bookmarked this story immediately and finally, I have come for it :3 Tho I do must say that the Lyrical tag intimidates me (I am not ...
Oct 5 -
Re: Chapter 10
Hia Catssss =D I’m still under the weather but I want to keep up my reviewing streak. Hope you bear with me and my ramblings today :3 Ohaaa how far ...
Oct 4 -
Re: Writing Practice - Advice Please!!
Hia and welcome! It’s great to see you engage with the community. Before I read your work, let me tell you that the best thing you can do as a ...
Oct 3
