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  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Everyone Gets Buried With Something Unsaid

    Hey Lilly!!♡ GIRL, THIS ONE HURTS. There is something horrifyingly real about how the things that we do not say, eventually define who we are. I absolutely adore how u ...

    Oct 24
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Nobody Is Coming

    Hey Lilly!!♡ OKAY, THIS ONE. I needed to reread this one several times because of this incredibly painful feeling of waiting for someone to realize ur potential and allow you ...

    Oct 24
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: What the Dust Remembers

    Hey Lilly!! GIRL the way u describe the existence makes me want to contemplate my life while staring at the ceiling at 2 am! I loved these lines: We build ...

    Oct 22
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: The World, Briefly

    Hey Lilly!! i like how u wrote that. It's a very comforting poem as if it's telling u to relax and be glad that u're still here for a while. ...

    Oct 22
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Stargazing

    Hey dream writer! Today i am reviewing ur beautiful work for u. Unfortunately im quite busy with a lot on my plate but since im trying to increase my yws ...

    Oct 5
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: A Crimson Star

    Hey writer! I am here today to review ur beautiful work this one really took me by surprise. i really liked how the poem starts off with such a simple ...

    Oct 5
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Chapter 11, 12, and 13 (full chapters) - The Lady of Light (completed novel, draft 3)

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    Hey Dom! We are back for another chapter review, yay! And i have to say that Chapter 11, 12, and 13 of The Lady of Light were quite possibly some ...

    Oct 4
  • Other » General, General Re: Who Are You?

    Hey jewel! Today I'll be reviewing ur beautiful work! I really appreciate the way you turned such a simple question 'Who are you?' into something far more extensive, something that ...

    Oct 3
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Action / Adventure Re: The Girls Chapter 1

    Hey Red! Let's review your beautiful work! I really did enjoy the lively and chaotic atmosphere of this chapter, and the way Cat, Addy and Zoey interacted made them sound ...

    Oct 3
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Chapter 5: Maryam (full chapter) - The Lady of Light (completed novel, draft 3)

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    Hey Dom! back again with Chapter 5 and I've also enjoyed it, even though, given the heaviness of the earlier chapters, it's a good thing to slow down a bit ...

    Oct 3
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Chapter 9 and 10 (full chapters) - The Lady of Light (completed novel, draft 3)

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    Hey Dom! I'm back once more for Chapters 9 and 10, and I must say that I really liked them they offered a good combination of more peaceful scenes featuring ...

    Oct 3
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Nature Re: Wild Horses: Sun's story

    Hey Moss! I really enjoyed reading “Wild Horses: Sun’s story.” I can tell this was written as a rough draft, but there are some genuinely emotional ideas here, especially Sun’s ...

    Oct 2
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Sheep Dogs (chapter 3)

    Hey Red! I really enjoyed Chapter 3. I think this chapter was quieter than the previous ones, but honestly, that made the relationship between Elias and Beau stand out even ...

    Oct 2
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Chapter 9 and 10 (full chapters) - The Lady of Light (completed novel, draft 3)

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    Hey Dom! back again for Chapters 9 and 10! I enjoyed both for being filled with character moments, lighter scenes, and building up towards the next set of conflicts. Chapter ...

    Oct 2
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Unsolved Deceptions Chapter 3 Back to School

    Hey MAC! Let’s get into Chapter 3! As I already read through Chapters 1 and 2, it was interesting to see what kind of challenge Evans would face this time, ...

    Oct 2


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