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> I really liked how you made the tree feel like more than just a tree. It feels like it grows alongside the person and watches all the stages of ...

> I really liked how raw and honest this feels. The repetition of “I wasn't thinking” and “I didn't want to do it” makes the ending feel more serious, especially ...

I really liked the way you used the moonlit girl throughout the poem. The imagery is really strong, especially the heart made of velvet dreams and the weeping metronome in ...

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This poem honestly made me feel really sad. The idea of writing a letter to someone who is still alive but has changed so much that they almost feel like ...

I really liked reading this poem. I loved how you described autumn through so many different things, like the falling leaves, birds, wind, pumpkins, apples, cinnamon, and the warm mug. ...

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I really liked the mysterious atmosphere of this story. Zara’s relationship with the spiders immediately made her character interesting, and the calliope music leading her to an abandoned circus mad