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Hello!! Am moon.you have reviewed my works so am reviewing yours. I really love the repetition of “Another crack. Another beat. Another gasp. Another leap.” It gives the poem a ...

Hello! Am moon Firstly, I'm really in love with this poem. I think the speaker is talking to someone who has died, and maybe the speaker wants to die too. ...

Hello!! am moon. You have reviewd my works so am reviewing yours. I liked this poem . I actually liked the repetition of “Death is the easy path.” It worked ...

Hello! Am moon I really like this poem. It was easy to read and I really liked the imagery.that red part kinda make me feel bad yet its ok. I ...

Hello Lilly! Am moon. I really liked this poem. It kind of feels like something I would write in my diary. I really liked the “stay a little longer” part, ...

Hello am moon!! I really enjoyed this peom. I think am kinda obsessed with it. Mainly i liked that rose part, it really got me. I don't how to explain ...

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Hello! I enjoyed the mysterious and adventurous atmosphere of this chapter. The opening immediately creates a sense of discomfort and uncertainty through the ruined shrine, the decaying surroundings,

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This was a beautifully imaginative and emotional story. I really liked how it began with something so simple and innocent—the two girls creating their “High Blocks”—and gradually transformed i

Okay I really liked this!! The whole opening felt so eerie. Like the “I couldn’t tell if it was dark or if my eyes were closed” part immediately gave me ...

I genuinely don't even know where to start This was like opening one of those “I’ll just read a little” things and then suddenly I'm 40 pages deep into the ...

Heyy!! I really enjoyed this chapter. It starts off pretty simply with Lupus being woken up for the execution, but once he actually sees King Siraj, I immediately started wondering ...

Heyy Dom!! I really liked this one. The whole New Bombay setting is honestly so miserable but in a really good dystopian way. The polluted air, concrete rain, respirators, ads ...

Heyy! I really enjoyed this prologue. The opening with the rain immediately pulled me in, and I loved how Aureon’s thoughts made him feel less like some untouchable, all-powerful god ...

Heyy! I really liked the idea behind this. It’s short, but it makes you stop and actually think about what free will even means. The question at the beginning immediately ...

Heyy! This was honestly such a heavy read, but I really liked it. The contrast between the beginning and the rest of the piece stood out to me a lot. ...