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  • Lyrics » Narrative, Dramatic Re: Dirty Town - Song

    Hello 4evergreen. Am moon! I really enjoyed reading this! I can definitely see why you used “Dirty Town” as the title because the whole song has this dark, trapped feeling ...

    Oct 3
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Action / Adventure Re: The Girls Chapter 1

    hello, am moon! I really enjoyed reading this chapter! °w° I really liked the fun and chaotic friendship between Cat, Addy, and Zoey. Their little jokes and conversations made them ...

    Oct 3
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Light

    Hi hira. Am moon! I really liked the gentle feeling of this poem. The way you describe someone who quietly stays with pain and fear instead of fighting them makes ...

    Oct 3
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Regret Opens a Museum

    Hi hira! Its moon! I really liked this one! The whole idea of regret being turned into a museum is honestly so creative. Every room felt like a different kind ...

    Oct 3
  • Short Story » Narrative, Romantic Re: Perfect, and Hers

    Hey Rithika! I really enjoyed reading this. I loved how “Him” slowly became more meaningful as the story went on, and the ending made everything click for me. The idea ...

    Oct 3
  • Article / Essay » Narrative, Realistic Re: What The Bench Remembered

    I really loved this piece. 🥹 It reminded me of something I used to think back then—that teachers are not only teachers. Everything around us can teach us something really ...

    Oct 3
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Fantasy Re: WoS Ch18 - Reunion

    Hey Tikaya! I really enjoyed this chapter! The reunion felt so warm, and I loved seeing everyone together again. Gotsumon was definitely my favorite part! His reaction to the Spirit ...

    Oct 3
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: The Final Goodbye 🫂

    Hello! 🫂 I really enjoyed reading this short story. There’s something about the way you wrote the goodbye that makes it feel incredibly personal and bittersweet. I especially loved how ...

    Oct 3
  • Poetry » Literature, Romantic Re: Shall I admire you?

    Hello! Am moon, I really enjoyed reading this. Your poem feels so gentle and sincere, especially the idea of admiring someone quietly without asking anything from them. I really liked ...

    Oct 3
  • Poetry » Supernatural, Lyrical Re: Struggles

    This was such a dark and emotional piece. I really liked how the “devil” slowly turns into a reflection of the narrator, because that makes the whole piece feel much ...

    Oct 2
  • Short Story » Romantic, Narrative Re: Shared Solitude

    I really loved how this piece explores silence, solitude, and love without making them feel like separate things. The way you described being understood through small gestures, like fidgeting fingers ...

    Oct 2
  • Poetry » Literature, Realistic Re: Gravity Falls in Love

    I really loved this. The way you turned gravity and the moon into two lovers who can never truly reach each other is so beautiful. “I make the water dance” ...

    Oct 2
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: A Heart Like Mine

    I really loved this poem. The way you describe carrying people like they are fragile things is such a beautiful metaphor, and I especially liked “until silence feels safer than ...

    Oct 2
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: True Love

    I really enjoyed reading this! I love how you described the kind of love that makes someone feel safe and helps them love themselves too. “Walking through almosts” was such ...

    Oct 2
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: I loathe you

    Hi! I really felt the anger and hurt behind this. The way you repeated “I loathe you” made it feel like the speaker was trying to convince herself as much ...

    Oct 2


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