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I like the dramatic entrance of Laughing Jill. It's a cool idea that Abby as a scare actor wants to bring this scary aspect into the show, and that Jill ...

This poem is sad and nostalgic. It feels restrained and quiet. I like the metaphor of the mask, especially the part where the mask becomes so convincing that everyone believes ...

this was a fun chapter but I am confused a bit because I don't know what happened before and it does feel like a chapter already a part way through ...

1) What's your initial reaction to the chapter? It was a change from the previous chapter, with less fight and more about what power can cost 2) What were your ...

1) What's your initial reaction to the chapter? I do not know Digimon and have not read your story before. It seemed to be an intense chapter that escalates quickly ...

Poor Kyle. He seems like a nice boy, yet his friend doesn't care that he is feeling uncomfortable, and his parents have taken his video games. I think the parents ...

Rev was an edgy but cool character and I liked his dialogue as it brought some humour. The meeting introduces us to the rest of the cast in person, and ...

Here we go to another point of view elsewhere in the adultless word. Using multiple narrators is a good choice for a Young Adult genre since it keeps pacing dynamic ...

I see there is already many reviews on the chapter, and I don't want to go over on the same points as them. Kurt is a compelling protagonist for me, ...

I enjoy the imagery you use in this poem. It evokes a very strong image in my head. I have heard of marble hornets and seen clips, but not watched ...

Cal finally tells Alex what happened and he could have gone into more detail with everything that has just happened and how long it has been dragged out for poor ...

This is the shortest chapter yet. I think it might well have come at the end of chapter 10. They are really dragging this out, but I do understand why. ...

Does a highlighter click? I have not used one that has a clicking mechanism like a pen does, but that might just be me not being cool enough with my ...

The sensory detail at the beginning is nice with the lights. It helps me visualise the scene more. Poor Lucy just wants to do the project, and I am not ...

It was not nice of Cal to blame Lucy for the panic attack, since he knows the real reason why. Lucy seems a bit of a third wheel. I wonder ...