wanyuan

Hello... I think this is quite a good poem. The word 'miss' actually plays a double role here for me. It can mean missing someone because they are no longer ...

Hi, I like the way you started this poem. Rather than just telling us what the friendship was like, you let me picture those scenes of the two of you ...

Hello Moon, Thank you so much for reading my poem and sharing your thoughts. I'm glad you liked it.

Thanks a lot for the review! I'm glad you enjoyed reading it.

Hello, Thanks a lot for reading this! Actually, I didn't write this based on any particular war. I feel, no matter where the war is being fought or for what ...

Hello AJ, Thanks a lot for the review..... I'm glad you liked the poem. And especially, thank you for pointing out the mistakes. I'll keep them in mind.

Thanks a lot for your review..... I am glad you liked it