Hades please just take me away
The night is loud and I can't find the break of day
Every shadow paints another maze on the wall
And every answer feels a thousand miles too small
I walk through halls of echoes and fading names
Trying to outrun storms that don't play fair games
But somewhere underneath the thunder and the gray
A spark keeps whispering, "you don't have to fade away"
The river calls, but I won't cross tonight
There's still a fire buried under all this fight
I'm not a ghost, I'm still breathing
Even when the darkness gives me every reason
To believe I'm lost beyond repair
I find one light and hold it there
The world can shake, the sky can bend
But this is not the place my story ends
Through the cold, through the rain
I'll keep finding my way again
The stars look cracked through the clouds above
But broken skies can still let in enough
For one more step, for one more song
For proof that I have made it this far along
The weight is real, I won't pretend
But heavy hearts can learn to heal and mend
And every dawn that rises from the sea
Reminds me that tomorrow hasn't given up on me
If the underworld is listening below
Tell it there's a traveler who chose not to go
Not because the road is easy to survive
But because there's still a thousand reasons to stay alive
I'm not a ghost, I'm still breathing
Even when the darkness gives me every reason
To believe I'm lost beyond repair
I find one light and hold it there
The world can shake, the sky can bend
But this is not the place my story ends
Through the cold, through the rain
I'll keep finding my way again
Hades, you can wait another day
I've still got roads ahead of me to find my way.
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I made this last year when I wanted to die and was going to take my life last year.
my review this is really goood love the rymes