Warning: This work has been rated 16+ for mature content.
I heard that the prettiest flowers wither by July
Standing in this sweltering summer, I wish it were a lie
If I'm a flower bloom penetrating through the mud
Then I'd most rather this burden be paid by blood
Seeing those petals drift down make my heart ache
Your spring died so suddenly, so unfairly, my dear
Know that I've promised to wait for your wake
And I hope that by then I'll have faced my fear.
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This poem has a ton of vague references to me, so I'm challenging you guys to try to decode all of them-- I can't wait to see your interpretations!
Oops, sorry, it keeps posting my review as a comment even when i check the review boxes, so thats fine I'll leave it as that then
I love this! It's a very bittersweet poem. I really like the first two lines, just the meaning and how they flow is really beautiful. Despite how short the poem is, it tells a very nice story. It's sad, like someone has been lost, but there is also a sense of promise and determination. It's very beautiful!
Sorry, this was meant to be a review, so I've reposted it as one
You did a fine job
Writing your poetry
I believe that you were born
To be a poet
Please don't put yourself down
By saying I could do better
Yes you did fine today
Also you should be proud of
Your achievements
You should not think about what others
Think about you
You are fine the way you are
Also you are somebody special
Made by God
Hey, aldokraas!
Thank you for your review, however, I believe this should be classified as a comment rather than a review!
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Thank you!
Romance??i kinda felt its sad poem idk
Tragedy isn't an option for genre, unfortunately...
So you choose romance?? You could have just left it with general
I mean, it's also about a boy I like...
* gasp* did you both separated now then? Or did he - like uhm sry
...I'll tell you the rest privately...
* nod*