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I'm so excited you already posted a third chapter! Let's get right into it: “Pardon?” Beau asks , unsure of what exactly Elias is asking. “Why aren’t you satisfied with ...

Okay, I was so excited to see you finally posted a second chapter!! I loved the first one, and this is a big improvement too, and I am going to ...

Hi Queenie! This is a poem I can relate to very much. It's clear and direct, which works well because it shows you understand the feeling and can convey it ...

Hi moon! This was a beautiful description of the rain and someone watching it. I know I love watching rainstorms from my bedroom window, so it really resonated with me! ...

Hi there! Let's just get straight into the review! Even though his screen was bright enough to help him see in the cave, it was nowhere near bright enough to ...

Hi! I loved this poem. It's short and simple but conveys a lot of strong feelings in a brilliant way. I understood it to be about feeling cut off from ...

Hey creeper! This is a really interesting poem I love how it opens with: Born Josefina Agnelli Married Desmond Fitzpatrick It reads like a wedding register, in an almost clinical-sounding ...

Hello! I was very intrigued by this first chapter and seeing The Warriors Code at the beginning piqued my interest even more. This is a really solid start to a ...

Hi Rebel! This is such a sweet poem. I think writing poems for your friends is so adorable, and I wish I had thought to do that with my friends ...

Hi there! Welcome to YWS! Is this the first chapter? I definitely feel a little lost! The plot is very interesting but it seems like I am missing so much. ...

I am back again! I wanted to get to this yesterday, but I wanted to spend more time on the review than I ended up having, so I am happy ...

Hi! I wanted to review something older on the site, and randomly stumbled across this one! I really like the rhyme scheme. ABACBDC and so forth. It's really neat and ...

Hi Creeper! i just needed more of your jeff, so here we are! This was another great chapter. It's really unsettling, but not because of traditional horror but the dynamics ...

Hi again Dom! This was another brilliant chapter. I was so hooked throughout the entire shootout that I forgot I was meant to be making notes on what I wanted ...

Hi Dom! This was a really engaging chapter. Story-wise and pacing-wise, it was pretty perfect. The beginning and end, with Shayar recounting the story of Serafina and Tauth, give it ...