4revgreen

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Hi Creeper, hope you are well today. I enjoyed this short piece, having read a few of the previous ones. I love the idea of Marcus finding the scorpion and ...

Hi Creeper! Me again

Hello! I loved this short piece. It has a very distinct comic-noir energy about it, which I really enjoyed, with the museum-heist-gone-wrong structure and Franko's spiralling panic played for dark ...

I really like the atmosphere of this piece, especially with the decaying manor, circus music "crawling up the walls", they paint a really eerie picture throughout. I also think Poppy's ...

Lonely in my chamber with them. Them? I love this short opening; it really threw me straight into the poem! The word chamber is so interesting; there are a few ...

I loved obsession, so when I saw this poem I knew I had to review it. I think you captured Nikki's 'obsessed' version very well. The poem feels very quick-paced, ...

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Hi Aster! I wanted to check out your work, and this blew me away as the first piece you've posted on here! This is a lovely piece that deals in ...

FINALLY BACK! Let's just jump right into it Eventually, I handed JP the book with instructions on the Italian words so he could look over the remaining Spirit Warriors. Ha, ...

Hi! I loved this poem, and thought it was a really interesting view of writer's block or something similar. Let's get into the review: Words. They float around me Like ...

Hi Bug! I'm back for the next chapter. My mystery continues, and Alex must head off to class whilst still worried about her dream. Lucy is absent, and I wish ...

Hey Bug! I reviewed the other chapter and realised I had never reviewed the first one, so let's get to it! This is a nice opening chapter, and it sets ...

For a first poem, this is very strong work! The emotion shines through, and that's the most important bit for me. I think there is work to be done, as ...