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Aster

Aster

  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Adolescence

    Heyy, Aster here! 🎀✨️ Firsstttt, I really liked the central idea. The thought that a part of our childhood slowly disappears as we grow older is simple, but you've presented ...

    Sep 26
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Am lonely..

    Heyy, Aster here! 🎀✨️ Here's my review! First, I really loved the opening: At the end, I realized the moon was never lonely. I was the one who kept looking ...

    Sep 26
  • Poetry » General, General Re: my moonlit girl (to a younger me)

    Heyy, Aster here! 🎀✨️ Firssttt, your ribs were a cage for a heart made of velvet dreams is such a beautiful line, and windpipe housed a weeping metronome, is wonderfully ...

    Sep 26
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Rainfall

    Yooo, Aster herreeee!! And oh my god, this piece is GORGEOUS 🌸✨️ First of all, I really liked the imagery here “A sky too big for my eyes” is such ...

    Sep 22
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: As Lowly As Murder

    Yoo, Aster here! I'll try my best to express my views on this piece! First, I really liked the opening! “I am a monster. Or at least that is what ...

    Sep 21
  • Poetry » General, General Re: the little grieving girl

    Heyy, Aster here! 🎀✨️ I'll try my best to express my views on this piece!! Firstt, I really liked how directly you address the “little girl.” It makes the poem ...

    Sep 21
  • Poetry » Romantic, Fanfiction Re: Prince Charmed

    Hiii, Aster here! I'll try my best to express my views on this piece 🫡 Firssttt, I really loved how you turned the familiar Cinderella story into something romantic and ...

    Sep 21
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Blue

    Heyy, Aster here! 🎀✨️ I'll try my best to express my views on this piece! Firstttt, I absolutely LOVE the opening! The repetition of “The scratching of…” immediately caught my ...

    Sep 21
  • Poetry » Romantic, Literature Re: Lover/Friend

    Hii, Aster here! I'll try to give my thoughts good shape in this review. First, your piece is simple, doesn't have heavy figures of speech but I can literally IMAGINE ...

    Sep 20
  • Poetry » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: The Curly Headed Boy

    Hiii, Aster here! I'll try to give an awesome review for your hard work with areas to work on! Firsttt, The cosmic Imagery is STUNNINGGGG: Opening with the sun, moon, ...

    Sep 19
  • Poetry » Literature, Realistic Re: Fulcrum of a Rose

    Hii, Aster here!! First, OMFG, your work is so majestic, I love love loveee it!! What I could understand was that you showed beauty in what lies in between love ...

    Sep 18
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Just Like I Am

    Hiii, Aster here! Just read your piece. I'll try my best to rate your poem! First, wow. Just.. wow- I mean, your poem is so pretty! It seems like a ...

    Sep 18
  • Poetry » Romantic, Spiritual Re: oligarchy

    Hii, Aster this side! I'll try my best to give my opinion :) Firstttt, your imagery is FANTASTIC, I could imagine every line in my mind Second, your rhyming is ...

    Sep 18
  • Other » Fantasy, General Re: The Veils of the Starry Seas Prologue

    Hii, Aster this side!! I'll try my best to give my opinion in the best way I could

    Sep 18


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