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Re: Adolescence
Heyy, Aster here! 🎀✨️ Firsstttt, I really liked the central idea. The thought that a part of our childhood slowly disappears as we grow older is simple, but you've presented ...
Sep 26 -
Re: Am lonely..
Heyy, Aster here! 🎀✨️ Here's my review! First, I really loved the opening: At the end, I realized the moon was never lonely. I was the one who kept looking ...
Sep 26 -
Re: my moonlit girl (to a younger me)
Heyy, Aster here! 🎀✨️ Firssttt, your ribs were a cage for a heart made of velvet dreams is such a beautiful line, and windpipe housed a weeping metronome, is wonderfully ...
Sep 26 -
Re: Rainfall
Yooo, Aster herreeee!! And oh my god, this piece is GORGEOUS 🌸✨️ First of all, I really liked the imagery here “A sky too big for my eyes” is such ...
Sep 22 -
Re: As Lowly As Murder
Yoo, Aster here! I'll try my best to express my views on this piece! First, I really liked the opening! “I am a monster. Or at least that is what ...
Sep 21 -
Re: the little grieving girl
Heyy, Aster here! 🎀✨️ I'll try my best to express my views on this piece!! Firstt, I really liked how directly you address the “little girl.” It makes the poem ...
Sep 21 -
Re: Prince Charmed
Hiii, Aster here! I'll try my best to express my views on this piece 🫡 Firssttt, I really loved how you turned the familiar Cinderella story into something romantic and ...
Sep 21 -
Re: Blue
Heyy, Aster here! 🎀✨️ I'll try my best to express my views on this piece! Firstttt, I absolutely LOVE the opening! The repetition of “The scratching of…” immediately caught my ...
Sep 21 -
Re: Lover/Friend
Hii, Aster here! I'll try to give my thoughts good shape in this review. First, your piece is simple, doesn't have heavy figures of speech but I can literally IMAGINE ...
Sep 20 -
Re: The Curly Headed Boy
Hiii, Aster here! I'll try to give an awesome review for your hard work with areas to work on! Firsttt, The cosmic Imagery is STUNNINGGGG: Opening with the sun, moon, ...
Sep 19 -
Re: Fulcrum of a Rose
Hii, Aster here!! First, OMFG, your work is so majestic, I love love loveee it!! What I could understand was that you showed beauty in what lies in between love ...
Sep 18 -
Re: Just Like I Am
Hiii, Aster here! Just read your piece. I'll try my best to rate your poem! First, wow. Just.. wow- I mean, your poem is so pretty! It seems like a ...
Sep 18 -
Re: oligarchy
Hii, Aster this side! I'll try my best to give my opinion :) Firstttt, your imagery is FANTASTIC, I could imagine every line in my mind Second, your rhyming is ...
Sep 18 -
Re: The Veils of the Starry Seas Prologue
Hii, Aster this side!! I'll try my best to give my opinion in the best way I could
Sep 18
