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This brought out thoughts in me and I would like to share them! (This is in no way a criticism of your poem but rather me arguing with the poem) ...

No, American consumer it's H-I! Want to buy that overpriced paper and food now?

I would say this is a more creditable source than me for periods and commas after all I got confused too while writing this review about punctuation. Lol. Take everything ...

Wow. Why doesn't this have more attention?

I love the imagery and I think I finally know what a poem is, words describing the indescribable. It's not just about the feelings, it's about describing the feeling with ...

Wow, this gave me chills! It's gorgeous! Lilly, you are an artist!

I did not mean to out a extreme version of my own personality in my character. My subconscious is amazing at connections. Fun fact: has a chess personality quiz and ...

Poem made me want to rant so warning this is not a review. If I dare label it a review sue me! I'm typically the antagonist usually even with those ...

Yea, I was mostly writing how I felt in the moment which is why it could seem a little bland (lol) Thanks for the feedback!

Well... was.

The cover is a bit much, no?

I was guessing you were on the younger side. I will admit however I can be quite rushed in my own writing and it's something I need to work on ...

And references to the ego? We might be more similar than first thought. Funny enough I ended up talking this way because of a character I created of who I ...

Did I accidently not make it a review? Oops

This honestly in one way reminded me of myself. Hahha! I sometimes speak this way.. especially online while ranting which made me blush with embarrassment and a sheepish smile. The ...