Lzion

Awhhhhh THANK YOU WO MUCH you and palshlong said this could be a rap i’m kind of flattered to do one 🥲 it makes me wanna go to the studio

THANK YOU for your review I’ll listen to your feedback! I do agree I could strengthen more areas in my writing lol

But for real thanks man after hearing that I might have to make a recording demon just for ya! kidding (mostly) but you low-key inspired me. your cool man thanks ...

Appreciate you seeing the vision. The whole concept of 'dust turning into a permanent stain' felt like it needed that rhythmic, storytelling delivery. It’s definitely got that dark rap energy ...

your welcome!

btw I made spelling errors I'm sorry I have more to say

LOVE

BUT OMG LOBVE YOUR POEM

For a first poem, I have to say I am impressed! This poem beautifully contrasts the natural world with personal identity. keep up the good work pen pal!

your very welcome I hope you have a blessed day!

Hello Quenni, Thank you for sharing that it takes a lot of vulnerability open about feeling that way! just wanted to remind you your definitely not a ''ugly bear'' were ...