Sullengirl2011

Thank you for the advice and no you don't sound pretentious at all lol I appreciate you spending the time to look through my work. I'll keep that piece of ...

Thank you lol I'm glad to help! I hope to see more of your writing soon!

Thank you for your advice :> this one is definitely not one of my best works so I agree with your critique and I'll try to fix these problems with ...

Lol someone

I just edited the poem to be fixed and have proper grammar. Thank you :> have a wonderful day! - Sullen

Thank you for the review. Throughout the poem I was trying to focus on knives because of the phrase like "a knife through my back" but I definitely could've widened ...

Thank you sooo much for taking the time to review my work that means a lot already. Now to address the grammatical error, yes that should be "you're" lol. I ...

Thank you :>

Awwww I love this :> I feel like it makes me feel like something is ending but there's also a completely new start to something exciting. It's sooo good keep ...

Thank you so much :> I am someone who's pretty direct so writing raw songs is kinda something that comes more easily. Thank you again lol I'm not used to ...