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  • Short Story » General, General Re: Summer is dead to me

    Hi Liv! I'm here to review your short story. I found your story to be such a richly rendered view of a late summer beach! Mia is delightfully cynical and ...

    Oct 24
  • Poetry » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: The Seat Behind Mine

    Hi Jennie! This was a really poignant and interesting poem. I started asking him questions I knew the answers to, asking for pens I already had, I especially liked this ...

    Oct 24
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Fence

    Hi! Cyan here to review your work. I want to start off this review by saying that I found your chapter such an evocative and vivid story of a crumbling ...

    Oct 14
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Nature Re: A Tree Falls in the Forest

    Ah, wow. This poem is really really beautiful. I love the extended metaphor of the tree representing a person who won't let themselves take up space. I think the tree ...

    Oct 11
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Sestina for Societal Collapse

    I am in love with the sestina form that you chose here! the cycling words seem to make the transformation within this poem - from viewing the inevitable end of ...

    Oct 11
  • Poetry » Horror, General Re: four. mayibeexcused

    I read through your whole collection "a body that will not behave", enraptured. each one is so visceral and creative. I love the use of parentheses and footnotes. I honestly ...

    Oct 10
  • Short Story » Realistic, Other Re: Life of a Teenage Girl

    First review on this site! I loved this sentence. . My chin is too long my nose is big my cheekbones are too small. It's really interesting how you use ...

    Oct 7


have u ever noticed how ugly rosy-lipped batfish r? and not like in the “aw ur so ugly ur cute” way that like opossums r — no they’re just hideously ugly beasts that should never have existed and r the epitome of evolution fails. the stupidity, blank look, head emptiness. they’re horrible n everyone who likes them r horrible too. they truly have the worst fan-base >:[
— Shady