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Re: Summer is dead to me
Hi Liv! I'm here to review your short story. I found your story to be such a richly rendered view of a late summer beach! Mia is delightfully cynical and ...
Oct 24 -
Re: The Seat Behind Mine
Hi Jennie! This was a really poignant and interesting poem. I started asking him questions I knew the answers to, asking for pens I already had, I especially liked this ...
Oct 24 -
Re: The Fence
Hi! Cyan here to review your work. I want to start off this review by saying that I found your chapter such an evocative and vivid story of a crumbling ...
Oct 14 -
Re: A Tree Falls in the Forest
Ah, wow. This poem is really really beautiful. I love the extended metaphor of the tree representing a person who won't let themselves take up space. I think the tree ...
Oct 11 -
Re: Sestina for Societal Collapse
I am in love with the sestina form that you chose here! the cycling words seem to make the transformation within this poem - from viewing the inevitable end of ...
Oct 11 -
Re: four. mayibeexcused
I read through your whole collection "a body that will not behave", enraptured. each one is so visceral and creative. I love the use of parentheses and footnotes. I honestly ...
Oct 10 -
Re: Life of a Teenage Girl
First review on this site! I loved this sentence. . My chin is too long my nose is big my cheekbones are too small. It's really interesting how you use ...
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