emehendry

This was actually my first ever poem, like ever, i have one in my drafts about ignorance which I think is beautiful, but I don't have enough points so I ...

This was beautiful, once again, I love your concept of literally killing to look like someone. It is so stunning and I noticed that most of your poems are like ...

Yeah, I felt I repeated it a bit too much at the end, but thank you so much!

This is haunting. It stays with you after you've finished reading it. I didn't quite understand some parts, such as the part where the grandma was like eating herself? There ...

its good but i stress the panic more, like make the reader really like feel what the speaker is experiencing. make it feel urgent and fast past yet at the ...

This is absolutley beautiful like insane! gcould you review my poem, Ignorance? Im only tweleve so please be completely honest

I get what your trying at, its good but I would add more detail, setting, and its a bit fast paced. But besides that its like really good