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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Nightmare I Didn't Tell You

    Hey Pike! Today I’ll be reviewing your beautiful poem! I found “The Nightmare I Didn’t Tell You” to be terrifying because Pike u managed to make the guilt felt from ...

    Sep 30
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Falling

    Hey! I personally loved the poem "Falling" because it had a humorous undertone that made the amorous feelings of the author sound even more sincere. The casual tone in which ...

    Sep 30
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The moon is beautiful, isn't?

    Hey! I am fond of the imagery used in this poem to describe the idea of love as something that is always trying to reach something bigger than itself. The ...

    Sep 29
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Am I in love?

    Hey! I like how the poem takes up the question posed by the title and returns to it several times, each time expanding on the various ways to perceive love ...

    Sep 29
  • Poetry » Realistic, Realistic Re: Who I will !

    Hey! I like this poem because of the way it takes one question and develops into something much bigger, asking questions beyond what was initially presented. The repetition of "Who ...

    Sep 29
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Pieces of my heart

    Hey! I was greatly impressed by how this poem manages to capture the idea of friendship beautifully despite the distances. The very name, “Pieces of my heart,” already says that ...

    Sep 29
  • Poetry » Health, Nature Re: Those delightful fruits

    Hey! I loved the imagery and symbolism that went into this poem. It transformed an ordinary fruit into something far more meaningful. First of all, the poem seems to praise ...

    Sep 29
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Chapter 5: Maryam (full chapter) - The Lady of Light (completed novel, draft 3)

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    Hey! I loved this chapter because it feels lighter, but there is still some intrigue going on underneath. The thing that got me hooked was none other than Maryam herself. ...

    Sep 28
  • Other » General, General Re: my work

    This is a hilariously absurd crossover featuring Thomas the Tank Engine and Bob the Builder on one of the most historically tense settings known to man: Cold War era Berlin. ...

    Sep 28
  • Short Story » Realistic, Literature Re: A little less blue

    Hey! This is such a short little piece but it is clever and it takes a normal museum visit and makes it a surreal experience without giving away everything, which ...

    Sep 28
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Therapist Friend

    Hey! I think you wrote this not really as a poem, but more like an inner monologue, which for me actually makes it better. The whole thing is about the ...

    Sep 28
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Greedy

    Hey! I appreciate how "Greedy" manages to take a word that typically has a negative connotation and make it so much more multidimensional. I think that this poem is actually ...

    Sep 28
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Chapter 4: Becalmed (full chapter) - The Lady of Light (completed novel, draft 3)

    Hey! I really liked this chapter. Although it's called Becalmed, there's never a dull moment. The ship is stuck without the wind, but people's feelings aren't. Eliza worries about the ...

    Sep 28
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Chapter 3: Odehi and The Conspiracy (final part) - The Lady of Light (completed novel, draft 3)

    Hey! I really enjoyed this continuation because I felt the tension from the previous part was well-paid. This chapter is an impressive race against time both for Dazhyen and Eliza, ...

    Sep 28
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: "I am not Jerry!"

    Hey! I liked the playfulness and character in this poem. It's not really a description of a person, but the collection of little things that make up who she is, ...

    Sep 27


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