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Thank you so much for the review ! I fixed the spacing, changed those old phrases, and added a line to make the tree's message clearer.

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Hm😁i really did!. Hmm don't mind check my poems too if you have time

Of course! I mostly meant the “Dirty Town” lyrics. A few parts felt a little abrupt when I read them without the music, especially the switch from “I try to ...

Wow!

Thank you so much. Check my other peoms too

I really loved the idea behind this poem. The accountant and the kindnesses being written down made the whole piece feel unique. The ending was especially beautiful, like kindness has ...

I know am not good at writing stories yet i tried my best! I hope all gonna like this.:)

Thank you

Ohh... I got it.for those ideas i don't know i just write what i feel in my heart that's it hehe😁

Thank you

Thank you rithika

Thank you

Its fine! I really like reading this kind of works