Are roses red?
Are violets blue?
Because my oh my,
baby I can't stop thinking 'bout you
The smile on your lips
always seems to send my heart in flips
The color of your eyes,
is always startling
so now please don't be shy
cuz baby they're my everything
Your words are like a kiss
and baby they're gone in a bliss
I keep thinking to myself
don't leave; don't leave
promise that you'll stay with me
The smile on your lips
always seems to send my heart in flips
The sound of your voice
And I can't stop thinking that i'm your choice
So are roses red?
are violets blue?
because my oh my
baby I can't stop thinking 'bout you
Points:
Time spent:
IP address:
Canary word: Present
Possible AI signals:
Original Text:
Are you sure you want to delete this comment? This cannot be undone.
Mark this comment as a review? Points will be awarded to the poster.
Your comment was posted, but it wasn’t long enough to count as a review. Reviews need about four complete sentences (at least 250 characters). Try writing another review that explains your thoughts in more detail — the author will appreciate it, and you’ll earn points for it.
142,249 Literary Works • 677,084 Reviews
This is a beautiful example of love and emotion all wrapped up in some of the most beautiful packaging: lyrics.
What you did here is so important to recognize, that when you love someone, sometimes the emotion and thing YOU see is confusing to others, but recognizable by only yourself. I love the expressive imagery in this like where you said
because its true, when you're deeply in love, the only thing that never leaves your mind is how you feel for the other person.
This also is such a true thing and I am honored to read this beautiful work. I hope you do more with it, and finally, my favorite line before I sum this up,
THIS set resonates with me so so much. I don't have words for how these lyrics make me feel, aside from the fact that these words are the words of someone so deeply and madly in love that its like leaving would rip their heart up and ruin them.
beautiful work once again, I hope to read more from you!
-PikeFisher4Life
Hi there! Thank you SO much!!! I'm so glad that you liked it!!
This reminds me of the girl I like.She always wrote songs. Everything about this is giving off vibes from her.But I' gonna skip that and start the review
My favorite lines and the lines I can understand
"I keep thinking to myself
don't leave; don't leave
promise that you'll stay with me"
I want to know if they have left before or if you're trying to deal with the fact that they left you. Or you just don't want them to leave you.It's perfectly fine to feel any of these ways
The parts that remind me of the girl I like are
"Are roses red?
Are violets blue?
Because my oh my,
baby I can't stop thinking 'bout you"
It don't know why these lines give those vibes,but they just do
Aww! That's so sweet!!
No, they haven't left lolll but it's mainly about them hoping not to leave. That's so adorable, i'm so happy that it made you think of her!!
Hi @Jayne!
My favorite lyric, it flow so well, and it makes me happy <3
I am not allowed to date the guy that I like (Crazy story rly, he asked me out at church and I had to say nooo 😥. But we are like with eachother all the time, and we are pretty much dating soo) this is exactly how I feel when i am with him! You captured that feeling very well
🤗🤗🤩
I love a good song that rymes. Truly rymes. You did amazing! Keep up the hard work!
Aww thank you!!!
Ooohhh girlll sameeee!!! I'd love to hear about your story if I can!!! 🤩 I love a good romance! 🤭
frfr!
Writer style, or eta style? (long or short)
either!!